Sunday, 4 September 2011

The Height of Haiku Challenge, Day 4 - Birthday

Welcome to Day 4 of The Height of Haiku Challenge, where your challenge is to write 30 haiku in 30 days, with the themes given here. The prompt today and #62 overall is YOUR CHOICE. You can write on anything that you choose.

Here's mine: (I chose 'Birthday')

BIRTHDAY

Happy Birthday Babe!
If fifty's the new thirty
You'll soon be too young
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14 comments:

  1. Anonymous4 September 2011 at 03:48

    this is very sweet a lovely birthday wish!

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  2. Vinay Leo R.4 September 2011 at 04:05

    happy birthday to her from my side too :)

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  3. Anonymous4 September 2011 at 07:30

    Never too young, surely!

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  4. vivinfrance4 September 2011 at 07:49

    sweet!

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  5. Anonymous4 September 2011 at 09:38

    That's lovely! I hope she appreciates you :)

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  6. Nanka4 September 2011 at 12:40

    That makes me young too!! :)

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  7. Anonymous4 September 2011 at 12:53

    A great haiku.
    If 50 is the new 30 what does that make 60?

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  8. Cassiopeia Rises4 September 2011 at 15:19

    Good one Andy. It would be great if we could ride the merry-go-round backwards and be young again. Loved this.


    Melanie

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  9. Maude Lynn4 September 2011 at 15:39

    This is so sweet!

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  10. Rek Sesh4 September 2011 at 19:43

    Loved this....actually a blogger friend told me that sixties is the new twenties, in that context your haiku makes perfect sense. :)

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  11. Scarlet5 September 2011 at 02:29

    For sure another year is just a number ... happy day to your friend.

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  12. Magical Mystical Teacher5 September 2011 at 02:37

    I sense a little irony here...

    Day 4: Corn in the Wash

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  13. Anonymous8 September 2011 at 04:25

    Aw...sweet! (we share a birthday--it was fun to see "birthday" with Sept 4!)

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  14. Andy Sewina9 September 2011 at 00:16

    Hi Paula, the haiku prompt was to 'write on anything you choose' and my Nicola's birthday was actually on the 3rd, so I chose 'Birthday'.

    Happy Birthday again, to you for the forth! Mine was the 25th of August, which makes us all Virgo's!

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