tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post1617048292028797197..comments2023-11-10T23:19:49.002+00:00Comments on Straight talking street talking sweet...: TOP prompt "Internal Rhymes"Andy Sewinahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10023449074796269533noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-46306873375658544972008-10-17T11:43:00.000+01:002008-10-17T11:43:00.000+01:00Thanks Nathan, it was my first attempt and I enjoy...Thanks Nathan, it was my first attempt and I enjoyed figuring it out, it is however, quite a restricted form, so I don't know if I'll be doing many more.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-47987205288892570712008-10-17T11:22:00.000+01:002008-10-17T11:22:00.000+01:00Was this hard to write? I think I would find a cli...Was this hard to write? I think I would find a climbing rhyme very difficult. Great job.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-21279651174812655192008-10-17T10:15:00.000+01:002008-10-17T10:15:00.000+01:00Thanks annamari, that really is a compliment!Thanks annamari, that really is a compliment!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-73165159301632808722008-10-16T23:46:00.001+01:002008-10-16T23:46:00.001+01:00It is great rhyming. It reminds me of Dr. Seuss (i...It is great rhyming. It reminds me of Dr. Seuss (it is a compliment-I love Dr.Seuss)Anahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06611955404994410354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-76977984552749173922008-10-16T23:46:00.000+01:002008-10-16T23:46:00.000+01:00It is great rhyming. It reminds me of Dr. Seuss (i...It is great rhyming. It reminds me of Dr. Seuss (it is a compliment-I love Dr.Seuss)Anahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06611955404994410354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-78524785544379355892008-10-16T23:20:00.000+01:002008-10-16T23:20:00.000+01:00Hi witsblog.org, thanks for the visit, I love read...Hi witsblog.org, thanks for the visit, I love reading the things the children write over on your site.<BR/><BR/>Thanks Linda, really enjoyed reading you beach poem, Florida? Phew!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-73112580350427280972008-10-16T23:16:00.000+01:002008-10-16T23:16:00.000+01:00Hi Rob, thanks for the comment, I enjoyed writing ...Hi Rob, thanks for the comment, I enjoyed writing this.<BR/><BR/>Thanks Sue at Tumblewords, Is that like a clock movement?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-91413167768858916442008-10-16T22:42:00.000+01:002008-10-16T22:42:00.000+01:00Fun! Like reading Shel Silverstein!Fun! Like reading Shel Silverstein!Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-41632403109967290082008-10-16T22:18:00.000+01:002008-10-16T22:18:00.000+01:00Great rhythms. Very fun to read!Great rhythms. Very fun to read!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-31471044245697538942008-10-16T19:47:00.000+01:002008-10-16T19:47:00.000+01:00love the movement in this one!love the movement in this one!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-42163244290275282262008-10-16T19:15:00.000+01:002008-10-16T19:15:00.000+01:00this is great, whimsical yet sharp -- like skiing ...this is great, whimsical yet sharp -- like skiing wonderful moguls in the mind... ;)Rob Kistnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11365982588165098990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-62308506278611969352008-10-16T17:08:00.000+01:002008-10-16T17:08:00.000+01:00Thanks Gautami!Thanks Gautami!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-559186638978679742008-10-16T15:08:00.000+01:002008-10-16T15:08:00.000+01:00I read it aloud liked the sound of it!I read it aloud liked the sound of it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-40728092424631631392008-10-16T13:16:00.000+01:002008-10-16T13:16:00.000+01:00Hi Anthony, yeah the little elves could well be mi...Hi Anthony, yeah the little elves could well be mice!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-80364079579703762022008-10-16T11:39:00.000+01:002008-10-16T11:39:00.000+01:00That was different but very enjoyable. Afterwards ...That was different but very enjoyable. Afterwards I thought there should be a mouse in there somewhere - I was singing about it running up the clock.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-87820162605596275572008-10-15T07:09:00.000+01:002008-10-15T07:09:00.000+01:00Hi Stan, it must be the little Elves, scurrying ab...Hi Stan, it must be the little Elves, scurrying about up and down the grandfather clock case, the size of a giant oak tree to you or me, maybe.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-61215237869806925862008-10-15T02:05:00.000+01:002008-10-15T02:05:00.000+01:00A tick-tock beat to it, fits the subject of clocks...A tick-tock beat to it, fits the subject of clocks - but there's something more to it that just stays in the background.Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-22769689722537612792008-10-14T23:10:00.000+01:002008-10-14T23:10:00.000+01:00Thanks Jack, I appreciate that! It was written as ...Thanks Jack, I appreciate that! <BR/><BR/>It was written as a little experiment with the Climbing Rhyme form.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-71072518556251609312008-10-14T21:26:00.000+01:002008-10-14T21:26:00.000+01:00This reminds me of a guy down by the docks who cra...This reminds me of a guy down by the docks who crawled out from under his overturned small boat one morning and asked me "Hey, What day'ja have?" He had to ask about four times before I understood, "what day do you have?". <BR/>Your Tick Tock Stop made me laugh, so I had to write something for you.jack senderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08935449260703670377noreply@blogger.com