tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post3194680649746947904..comments2023-11-10T23:19:49.002+00:00Comments on Straight talking street talking sweet...: NaPoWriMo 2011 Day SixAndy Sewinahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10023449074796269533noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-1105931309468123622011-04-07T03:56:21.166+01:002011-04-07T03:56:21.166+01:00Love the complexity of the layered forms. Talent a...Love the complexity of the layered forms. Talent abounds!<br /><br />And...glad to know the trip to the doc was sans surgery!!<br /><br />~PaulaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-66333563258113354532011-04-07T03:29:39.830+01:002011-04-07T03:29:39.830+01:00I love the language and the smile it gave me. Sou...I love the language and the smile it gave me. Sounds surreal and stream of consciousness, too.<br /><br />http://judyidliketosay.blogspot.com/2011/04/dont-talk-think.htmlJudy Roneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05439992575221937268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-5300573506598703132011-04-06T18:51:29.706+01:002011-04-06T18:51:29.706+01:00A creative piece, Andy and I am glad that things w...A creative piece, Andy and I am glad that things went well at the doctor.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-2204972073478244772011-04-06T17:44:15.570+01:002011-04-06T17:44:15.570+01:00Late at night? This looks like a poem created late...Late at night? This looks like a poem created late at night, in a pub, and on a dare, which came out wonderfully right. I want to study your righting habits.Mike Patrickhttp://thepoetsquill.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-60729433331570344832011-04-06T17:02:43.417+01:002011-04-06T17:02:43.417+01:00The picture you create is wonderful, highly visibl...The picture you create is wonderful, highly visible and just plain fun. You had to have been laughing while you wrote it. Reminds me of something I heard between my son and his best friend, many years ago. They collapsed in laughter afterward.<br />Thank you,<br /><br />ElizabethElizabethhttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-31894853344965767432011-04-06T16:32:24.376+01:002011-04-06T16:32:24.376+01:00This was an exquisite piece of work!
Two boys with...This was an exquisite piece of work!<br />Two boys with big grins on their faces, pushing each other and insulting. was so in my mind i laughed so hard!<br />Thank you so much!<br /><br />Luna<br /><br />http://lunawitch15.wordpress.com/Miahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18020367854093199247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-81332136398475044362011-04-06T15:04:56.063+01:002011-04-06T15:04:56.063+01:00I admire your creativity and discipline! I'm s...I admire your creativity and discipline! I'm so terribly undisciplined that I can never focus long enough to write in a structured form. This is so lively and just delightful. <br />Sending healing thoughts your way,<br />ZZZouxzouxhttp://www.zouxzoux.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-63738013979382840332011-04-06T10:30:29.452+01:002011-04-06T10:30:29.452+01:00Thanks Tilly Bud, it's meant to be an acrostic...Thanks Tilly Bud, it's meant to be an acrostic, I'm not sure what the form is called - it's something I developed into a while back, it's set out like a sonnet but the last word on each line has to be the same or similar to the first word on the next line, also the Title and the first and last word are usually the same word too! If you want a Sestina please click my link 'Sewina Sestina' which you will find below the above piece.Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10023449074796269533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-74650701523837881252011-04-06T09:50:54.979+01:002011-04-06T09:50:54.979+01:00Sestinas are difficult; well done for this one.Sestinas are difficult; well done for this one.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-61352883378702552912011-04-06T09:12:04.637+01:002011-04-06T09:12:04.637+01:00Thanks Stan, you're right! midnight or thereab...Thanks Stan, you're right! midnight or thereabouts is the time I write. Thanks for giving me the fourteen letter word as a prompt: coincidentally.<br /><br />Hi Amy, thanks for your words! I saw your black-history-month piece, which was an excellent read, thank you!Andy Sewinahttp://sewina.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-76641171931441809522011-04-06T08:58:18.548+01:002011-04-06T08:58:18.548+01:00Another product of burning the midnight oil. Love ...Another product of burning the midnight oil. Love the way you dreamt this one up... no way you could have written it while you were still awake... ;)Stan Skihttp://says-sir-ten.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-30031568391192156502011-04-06T05:17:45.685+01:002011-04-06T05:17:45.685+01:00Andy, I have only recently met you at my blog, so ...Andy, I have only recently met you at my blog, so my best wishes for your recovery. And Tiny Tree, I had to decipher that, but let's not be in a big rush to get to the real one, OK? Love from your new friend, Amy Barlow Liberatore<br />Here's one of my usual rants!<br />http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/04/05/black-history-month/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-45655123331709824512011-04-06T02:06:08.976+01:002011-04-06T02:06:08.976+01:00Just to set the record straight, may I take this o...Just to set the record straight, may I take this opportunity to thank everybody for their concern, good wishes and prayers for my hospital visit yesterday. The good news for me is that I'm okay for now, but I have to go back in eighteen months for a further consultation.Andy Sewinahttp://sewina.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.com