tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post5408922928447763691..comments2023-11-10T23:19:49.002+00:00Comments on Straight talking street talking sweet...: TOP 5 EvocativeAndy Sewinahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10023449074796269533noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-28558253431970316432007-11-14T13:17:00.000+00:002007-11-14T13:17:00.000+00:00Deep, sad and full of truth. Wish it werent true, ...Deep, sad and full of truth. Wish it werent true, very well written, thank you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-57962468298539659802007-11-09T20:20:00.000+00:002007-11-09T20:20:00.000+00:00The image at the end gave me goosbumps! Excellent...The image at the end gave me goosbumps! Excellent ending to go along with the onomatopoeia. ~LindaLinda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-84744569288920246362007-11-09T15:55:00.000+00:002007-11-09T15:55:00.000+00:00Powerful combination of a strong sound-picture and...Powerful combination of a strong sound-picture and a shocking act/situation.Tiel Aisha Ansarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03994169558252043919noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-42931084245652624672007-11-08T23:08:00.000+00:002007-11-08T23:08:00.000+00:00Hi, thanks for all the comments, again It's a diff...Hi, thanks for all the comments, again It's a difficult one to comment on. <BR/>I wrote this from a memory of a trip to The Underground Hospital Museum in Jersey in the Channel Islands.Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10023449074796269533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-78996164092035351302007-11-08T21:53:00.000+00:002007-11-08T21:53:00.000+00:00Clink,clink, pick!Pickaxe chips. Rock splits, wate...Clink,clink, pick!<BR/>Pickaxe chips. Rock splits, water drips…<BR/><BR/>It's true...it's such a pleasure to hear the sound of these words together, but horrifying to realize their meaning. Very well written!Sherri B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00834386300886224116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-66362618855806988612007-11-08T19:18:00.000+00:002007-11-08T19:18:00.000+00:00Strong. Powerful. Music comes through the horror a...Strong. Powerful. Music comes through the horror and disgust. Excellent.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-44932683826957792412007-11-08T12:49:00.000+00:002007-11-08T12:49:00.000+00:00That first stanza is strong, hard, well written bu...That first stanza is strong, hard, well written but unbearably hard to read.Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15149139820474072721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-30903230135861060422007-11-08T11:53:00.000+00:002007-11-08T11:53:00.000+00:00"Clink,clink, pick!Pickaxe chips. Rock splits, wat..."Clink,clink, pick!<BR/>Pickaxe chips. Rock splits, water drips…"<BR/><BR/>I read and reread these line - 9 words and you've painted a picture!Paulinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14555472024981357622noreply@blogger.com