tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post5514920143106334169..comments2023-11-10T23:19:49.002+00:00Comments on Straight talking street talking sweet...: NaPoWriMo Day SixAndy Sewinahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10023449074796269533noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-12551007926530779402014-04-07T14:43:12.892+01:002014-04-07T14:43:12.892+01:00Always good to leave us hanging..waiting for more....Always good to leave us hanging..waiting for more..pleat and power back to you!Jae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-9195518552897253102014-04-07T10:45:11.647+01:002014-04-07T10:45:11.647+01:00Ah, Claretta, I doubt if she was thinking much by ...Ah, Claretta, I doubt if she was thinking much by the time they strung her up. Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10023449074796269533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-69419066619139063652014-04-07T10:38:12.762+01:002014-04-07T10:38:12.762+01:00Thank you, and I love the bit about the light temp...Thank you, and I love the bit about the light temper!Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10023449074796269533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-43059474854197511892014-04-07T10:34:59.763+01:002014-04-07T10:34:59.763+01:00Thank you!Thank you!Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10023449074796269533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-50673671739715429792014-04-07T10:09:43.824+01:002014-04-07T10:09:43.824+01:00Clara Petacci, Mussolini's 'mistress',...Clara Petacci, Mussolini's 'mistress', comes to mind... She must have felt the same way...Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-78852184149640592012014-04-07T02:55:28.479+01:002014-04-07T02:55:28.479+01:00Intriguing lines: 'Right the devil’s in the de...Intriguing lines: 'Right the devil’s in the detail making<br />Taking everything back to his unlit' ~ you have light temper, funny, thank you :)humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-35226325367354488772014-04-07T02:52:12.842+01:002014-04-07T02:52:12.842+01:00I also enjoyed the capture of the last sound with ...I also enjoyed the capture of the last sound with the beginning of a new line. A fun read and I applaud your singing.<br /><br />ElizabethAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-61976384262292886222014-04-07T01:28:42.650+01:002014-04-07T01:28:42.650+01:00Don't worry I'll sing it for you.Don't worry I'll sing it for you.Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10023449074796269533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-72936994655636082742014-04-07T00:59:53.101+01:002014-04-07T00:59:53.101+01:00If I were there, I'd be singing along!If I were there, I'd be singing along!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-22081074089139855542014-04-07T00:48:15.090+01:002014-04-07T00:48:15.090+01:00Yeah, he's a proper Johnny Reggae, with his tw...Yeah, he's a proper Johnny Reggae, with his two tone tonic strides.Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10023449074796269533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-80338153190961404912014-04-07T00:41:56.171+01:002014-04-07T00:41:56.171+01:00Too true, many thanks for the comment.Too true, many thanks for the comment.Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10023449074796269533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-28538244487379818782014-04-07T00:39:39.672+01:002014-04-07T00:39:39.672+01:00I'm singing it now, if it helps you I think it...I'm singing it now, if it helps you I think it sounds better if you change She's and her to you.Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10023449074796269533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-90759584009424484192014-04-07T00:35:05.796+01:002014-04-07T00:35:05.796+01:00Yeah, you really want to see her swing.Yeah, you really want to see her swing.Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10023449074796269533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-19977726097621177462014-04-07T00:33:47.483+01:002014-04-07T00:33:47.483+01:00Well spotted. It's a mad thing I do sometimes....Well spotted. It's a mad thing I do sometimes.Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10023449074796269533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-12618944682735974452014-04-07T00:32:35.219+01:002014-04-07T00:32:35.219+01:00Thank you, I thought fun was the way for me to go ...Thank you, I thought fun was the way for me to go with this.Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10023449074796269533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-79554322557261320152014-04-07T00:31:15.282+01:002014-04-07T00:31:15.282+01:00But I bet you really don't want to hear her sc...But I bet you really don't want to hear her scream.Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10023449074796269533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-6137750401609955012014-04-07T00:22:00.298+01:002014-04-07T00:22:00.298+01:00Plucking pucker diamonds sounds like a fun pursuit...Plucking pucker diamonds sounds like a fun pursuit--especially if the one offering the puckers is, shall we say, tasty.<br /><br />Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-58082529162435222042014-04-07T00:09:17.740+01:002014-04-07T00:09:17.740+01:00Fun along with the idea every thing is always chan...Fun along with the idea every thing is always changing.Gailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04219479223227928561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-89666236865549402062014-04-07T00:03:39.239+01:002014-04-07T00:03:39.239+01:00This is just fun to read. Makes me want to hear it...This is just fun to read. Makes me want to hear it sung. ;) De Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04798544585779003567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-81985547035612313112014-04-06T23:06:22.527+01:002014-04-06T23:06:22.527+01:00String her from the lampost to capture her thing a...String her from the lampost to capture her thing about swing... clever! A fun contribution. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-36207622482097815672014-04-06T22:28:55.420+01:002014-04-06T22:28:55.420+01:00How I loved the construction of this piece with ea...How I loved the construction of this piece with each line's last word echoed in the first of the next.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-68487088605660164092014-04-06T22:10:00.772+01:002014-04-06T22:10:00.772+01:00I love your humor and the last stanza. It was fun...I love your humor and the last stanza. It was fun to read and to think of the devil in the deep blue sea.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3042258266471605061.post-54522475862891758632014-04-06T21:15:26.786+01:002014-04-06T21:15:26.786+01:00Ah.. to swing from a lamppost.. I want to do that ...Ah.. to swing from a lamppost.. I want to do that as well..brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.com