Tuesday, 6 September 2011

The Height of Haiku Challenge, Day 7 - Hypnotic

Welcome to Day 7 of The Height of Haiku Challenge, where your challenge is to write 30 haiku in 30 days, with the themes given here. The prompt today and #65 overall is HYPNOTIC suggested by Tarang.

Here's mine:

HYPNOTIC

Who mesmerised you
Blah blink hypnotic blink blah
You mesmerised who
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Here's my 3WW piece.
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18 comments:

  1. Grace7 September 2011 at 00:28

    fun write...ha..ha...

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  2. Christine7 September 2011 at 03:25

    terrific, I used somewhat the same idea of repetition, very hypnotic write

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  3. vivinfrance7 September 2011 at 08:36

    very clever.

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  4. Nanka7 September 2011 at 09:13

    Clever palindrome in a Haiku form!! :)

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  5. knot2share7 September 2011 at 11:23

    :-).

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  6. Anonymous7 September 2011 at 11:57

    Very clever and a great read. Thanks.

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  7. Magical Mystical Teacher7 September 2011 at 13:05

    Oh, you had fun with this one!


    Hypnotic Meadow

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  8. Rek Sesh7 September 2011 at 15:42

    This is clever and fun...did you get an answer?

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  9. Cassiopeia Rises7 September 2011 at 16:56

    Interest form.Very clever of you my friend.


    Melanie

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  10. Anonymous7 September 2011 at 18:49

    You've caught the theme completely: great haiku.

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  11. Ron.8 September 2011 at 00:34

    When I'm done reading this you'll clap your hands three times & I will be fully awake, but I'll remember nothing of what happened, right?

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  12. Andy Sewina8 September 2011 at 00:41

    Hi Ron, You're back in the room!

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  13. Anonymous8 September 2011 at 03:39

    Cute Andy lots of fun to read!

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  14. Blossom Vydrina8 September 2011 at 04:29

    a haiku palindrome, that's a fun play, very nice

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  15. dsnake18 September 2011 at 08:42

    you are having fun. :)

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  16. Anonymous8 September 2011 at 11:32

    I didn't realise it was a palindrome until I read the comments.

    Nicely done.

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  17. Vinay Leo R.9 September 2011 at 11:27

    a fun palindrome :) well written!

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  18. Alan9 September 2011 at 21:13

    Love this Andy. I like the way the written haiku is shaped like an eye too.

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