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Monday, 26 November 2007

WI-12 Got Your Letter

GOT YOUR LETTER
I got your letter yesterday
How I wish you could come to stay
Even though you’re so far away
You wrote a note to say that you
Miss me need me want me love me
You are my sun you are my moon
You are my lyric and my tune
You are my midnight and my noon
So please please come back some day soon
Miss you need you want you love you
Don’t you know that I love you too?
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10 comments:

  1. Keith's Ramblings26 November 2007 at 01:15

    Smart poem! Great pace - it kinda jogs along. Like it a lot.

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  2. Preethi26 November 2007 at 02:08

    Nice... So Poetic in every sense!! And rhythmic.

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  3. Tumblewords:26 November 2007 at 03:54

    Oh, for sure, this is a poet's poem. Wonderful!

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  4. aMus26 November 2007 at 04:01

    sweet!!! the rhythmn grabs you!!!

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  5. Jo26 November 2007 at 06:34

    Love the breathlessness, and it says it all, really, doesn't it?

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  6. Anonymous26 November 2007 at 12:45

    great love poem ... like the repetition

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  7. Anonymous26 November 2007 at 18:39

    Ah the sun and the moon, so very romantic. Beautiful take on the prompt. Thanks.

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  8. Anonymous27 November 2007 at 09:07

    Hey, a girl needs to be told. She can't decipher it!!

    *grin*

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  9. Andy Sewina27 November 2007 at 11:17

    Thanks for all the visits and the kind comments!

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  10. Keith's Ramblings28 November 2007 at 16:43

    You sweet talking person! Fantastic

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