GOT YOUR LETTER
I got your letter yesterday
How I wish you could come to stay
Even though you’re so far away
You wrote a note to say that you
Miss me need me want me love me
You are my sun you are my moon
You are my lyric and my tune
You are my midnight and my noon
So please please come back some day soon
Miss you need you want you love you
Don’t you know that I love you too?
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Smart poem! Great pace - it kinda jogs along. Like it a lot.
ReplyDeleteNice... So Poetic in every sense!! And rhythmic.
ReplyDeleteOh, for sure, this is a poet's poem. Wonderful!
ReplyDeletesweet!!! the rhythmn grabs you!!!
ReplyDeleteLove the breathlessness, and it says it all, really, doesn't it?
ReplyDeleteI'm sorry but I couldn't help but think...my bonnie lies over the ocean, my bonnie lies over the sea...so bring back...bring back...bring back my bonnie to me...to me...bring...
ReplyDeleteOk, just couldn't help myself!
Very sweet and loving. I also could picture someone on a lighthouse waiting for their love to return....
great love poem ... like the repetition
ReplyDeleteAh the sun and the moon, so very romantic. Beautiful take on the prompt. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteHey, a girl needs to be told. She can't decipher it!!
ReplyDelete*grin*
Thanks for all the visits and the kind comments!
ReplyDeleteYou sweet talking person! Fantastic
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