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Wednesday, 24 September 2008

RWP #45 word fishing

These are my word fishing words

1. Roger McGough You and Your Strange Ways undersides

2. Anne-Marie Thompson Milkyway Moon camouflage

3. Adrian Henri Love Is… fanclub

4. Lemn Sissay Live Man Die (City Sigh) slick

5. Brian Patten On The Dawn Boat warnings

WORD FISHING

I applied to join your fanclub

Who knows which way it will take me

First I slide down the undersides

Then I get back into the groove

I’m really moving oh so slick

Automatic pilot now girl

There’s no need to heed the warnings

Flying high above the city

You alone are my camouflage

I’m so glad you let me join you

Word fishing in another world

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14 comments:

  1. Stan Ski25 September 2008 at 07:55

    Good use of the prompt words - and a dark-ish suggestion that we can hide behind our heroes to justify our actions - or just to hide.

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  2. Anonymous25 September 2008 at 08:11

    Yeah, I think the prompt was/is the thing here it is simply an exercise.

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  3. Anonymous25 September 2008 at 10:22

    I came originally from the north west and I really enjoyed this, especially the way you turned the prompt back on itself.

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  4. Anonymous25 September 2008 at 11:53

    Thanks Watermaid!

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  5. Anonymous25 September 2008 at 13:43

    I did not go for fishing but I went for internal rhyming.

    Someday

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  6. Anonymous25 September 2008 at 13:57

    Thanks Gautami, I think I just needed the exercise! perhaps..

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  7. poefusion25 September 2008 at 19:00

    Nice use of the prompt. But, I kinda doubt there's much word fishing going on here. More like getting down to the fun stuff. Well done. Have a nice day.

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  8. Anonymous25 September 2008 at 19:30

    Hi Michelle, I always thought fishing was meant to be fun!

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  9. Anonymous26 September 2008 at 12:16

    This has some great rhythm in it.

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  10. Anonymous26 September 2008 at 22:07

    I like the idea of fishing for words in another world, above the clouds.

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  11. Dave King28 September 2008 at 12:17

    Brilliantly done.

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  12. Anonymous28 September 2008 at 22:34

    Thanks Nathan!

    Hi Christine, it's weird isn't it?

    Hi Dave, many thanks for the comment.

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  13. Crafty Green Poet29 September 2008 at 07:57

    I like the idea you've used for word fishing in the last line and you've responded to the prompt very creatively.

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  14. Anonymous29 September 2008 at 10:31

    Thanks Crafty Green!

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