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Thursday, 14 April 2011

NaPoWriMo 2011 Day Fourteen

SPINNING FREE
Since you said that you loved me
like a fool I believed you
I wouldn't want to argue
'cos you know better than me
I'm writing this to tell you
that the world is spinning free
round and round my head it goes
up and down where no one knows
why does it do that to me
why do you allow it to
you're the one that I adore
since you said that you loved me
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11 comments:

  1. Head-spinningly good. Thanks

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  2. Loves you - loves you not... who knows? - Who knows better...?

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  3. Believe what they say, until they teach you to do otherwise. Nice piece.
    ~Brenda

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  4. Bittersweet write, Andy, love is tricky sometimes. Lovely piece.

    Pamela

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  5. Easier to believe when they show you than when they tell you. Several have used the word bittersweet....it is the right word!

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  6. All the tender places in one basket, like fragile eggs,

    Elizabeth

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  7. Yes, the world does spin a bit where love is concerned...this is a great write, Andy!

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  8. And this certaily spins...

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