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Saturday, 22 December 2007

Mad Kane 3 Limerick attempt.

YOUR SAUCY SMILE
The way you smile, I still can't forget.
I fell for you on the night we met.
When you said, you love me.
I said, I love you three!
Saucy smile, you do it for me yet.
MK3-221207
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5 comments:

  1. Anonymous22 December 2007 at 03:38

    It's honest and to the point. I don't quite get the "three" at the end of the fourth line - I supposed you were trying to rhyme with "me".

    Your attempts at limericks is admirable. I didn't even try one this time. I read your love at first sight haiku also.

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  2. Anonymous22 December 2007 at 03:55

    hey this is a cool limerick...and so very romantic, may the saucy smile continue to beguile, happy holidays to you and yours :)

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  3. Mad Kane24 December 2007 at 23:07

    Thanks for participating in my love prompt.

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  4. Anonymous11 January 2008 at 19:34

    hello mr talking guy, i must say your poetry doesn't do much for me on the page but i found this nice sounding open mic night in manchester if you want to give it to the world the way it was meant to be HEARD http://www.greenroomarts.org/archive/events/freed-up-9/

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  5. Yours truly Mason26 January 2008 at 20:29

    nice peom ive been in situations like this, i love smiles lol thanks for the comment

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