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Thursday 23 February 2012

Haiku Challenge 2012 - Day 23

Haiku Challenge 2012


Here's mine:

JOY OF GIVING
He gives ten per cent
From his income before tax
It gives him great joy

It gives him great joy
every time he pots a ball
To save just one child

To save just one child
Losing at Snooker won't help
He gives ten per cent
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14 comments:

  1. Yeah, I had fun working this one out, I think maybe ABC, CDE, EBA. might have been easier for me, because introducing F as a new thought in the third verse makes me want to write yet another verse, whereas EBA, instead of EFA, would close it nicely. Phew!

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  2. I like this - reminds me of tithing (that's a good thing) :-)

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  3. Nicely done! Yeah, this form was a bit of a challenge for me too!

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  4. Good job! Too complicated for me!

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  5. Nice job with the form...it is always good to give :)

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  6. Love the sense of balancing and comparing in these haiku! Delightful!

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  7. This is beautiful..I love playing snooker.. but then never had such nice thought s..

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  8. Wow...this is very thoughtful :) Loved mixture of two things!

    A burning candle

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  9. I can see you had fun doing this! You're the dude, Andy! Loved the haiku!

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  10. Tithing is a great subject for this prompt! Nicely done, Andy! Here is my Day 23.

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  11. Very nice set Andy...giving is always a joy ~

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  12. Great One Andy.. I hope you are having fun doing this challenge.. I can feel it..

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