Here's mine:
JOY OF GIVING
He gives ten per cent
From his income before tax
It gives him great joy
It gives him great joy
every time he pots a ball
To save just one child
To save just one child
Losing at Snooker won't help
He gives ten per cent
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He gives ten per cent
From his income before tax
It gives him great joy
It gives him great joy
every time he pots a ball
To save just one child
To save just one child
Losing at Snooker won't help
He gives ten per cent
23022012
Yeah, I had fun working this one out, I think maybe ABC, CDE, EBA. might have been easier for me, because introducing F as a new thought in the third verse makes me want to write yet another verse, whereas EBA, instead of EFA, would close it nicely. Phew!
ReplyDeleteI like this - reminds me of tithing (that's a good thing) :-)
ReplyDeleteNicely done! Yeah, this form was a bit of a challenge for me too!
ReplyDeleteGood job! Too complicated for me!
ReplyDeleteNice!
ReplyDeleteNice job with the form...it is always good to give :)
ReplyDeleteLove the sense of balancing and comparing in these haiku! Delightful!
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful..I love playing snooker.. but then never had such nice thought s..
ReplyDeleteAre you a Snooker player? Just wondering...
ReplyDeleteSheep Joy and Blanket Joy
Wow...this is very thoughtful :) Loved mixture of two things!
ReplyDeleteA burning candle
I can see you had fun doing this! You're the dude, Andy! Loved the haiku!
ReplyDeleteTithing is a great subject for this prompt! Nicely done, Andy! Here is my Day 23.
ReplyDeleteVery nice set Andy...giving is always a joy ~
ReplyDeleteGreat One Andy.. I hope you are having fun doing this challenge.. I can feel it..
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