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Tuesday, 29 July 2008

Matinee Muse #2

WHAT IF…
what if
I told you
that love isn’t true

what if
I said that
the ocean ain’t blue

what if
you believed
me just for one day

what if
my freedom
took your life away

what if
tomorrow
was much like today

what if
it rains when
we go out to play

what if
I miss you
will you miss me too

what if
what if I
fall in love with you
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8 comments:

  1. An alert girl/woman might say
    You had me on 'love isn't true' - only one possible outcome from there.

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  2. I like the resonance of this piece.

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  3. Hi Stan, The thing is that people believe what they want to believe, so when I tell my lover that love isn't true, she won't believe me because she believes it is. When I tell her I love her, she believes me because that's what she wants to hear.

    Hi Quilly, Thanks and many thanks for visiting.

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  4. This is deep! I came here for your usual light stuff that makes me smile but this had some serious depth to it...
    I loved it! Took me off guard!

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  5. Thanks Jen, it must be the weather, me? I'm going camping!

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