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Tuesday, 29 July 2008

Matinee Muse #2

WHAT IF…
what if
I told you
that love isn’t true

what if
I said that
the ocean ain’t blue

what if
you believed
me just for one day

what if
my freedom
took your life away

what if
tomorrow
was much like today

what if
it rains when
we go out to play

what if
I miss you
will you miss me too

what if
what if I
fall in love with you
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7 comments:

  1. Noah the Great29 July 2008 at 02:14

    I really like the last stanza.

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  2. Andy Sewina29 July 2008 at 15:43

    Thanks Noah!

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  3. Stan Ski30 July 2008 at 00:23

    An alert girl/woman might say
    You had me on 'love isn't true' - only one possible outcome from there.

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  4. Anonymous30 July 2008 at 04:16

    I like the resonance of this piece.

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  5. Andy Sewina30 July 2008 at 23:42

    Hi Stan, The thing is that people believe what they want to believe, so when I tell my lover that love isn't true, she won't believe me because she believes it is. When I tell her I love her, she believes me because that's what she wants to hear.

    Hi Quilly, Thanks and many thanks for visiting.

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  6. Andy Sewina31 July 2008 at 23:05

    Thanks Jen, it must be the weather, me? I'm going camping!

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  7. Tumblewords:1 August 2008 at 00:07

    Ah, I like this!! What if...

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