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Tuesday, 10 February 2009

Valentine's Day Verse Mad Kane's (Limerick & Haiku Prompt)

Written for Mad Kane's (Limerick & Haiku Prompt)
Valentine's Day Verse

Limerick:

I'll ask you for the millionth time
Will you, won't you, be my Valentine?
You know that I love you
That I'll always be true
Will you, won't you, will you please be mine?

Haiku (senryu)

Heartfelt
Valentine
be mine

NaisaiKu..
Have you tried it yet?

Heartfelt
Valentine
be mine
VALENTINE
mine be
Valentine
Heartfelt

Old English version:

Heartfelt Valentine
Be mine Valentine mine be
Valentine heartfelt
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6 comments:

  1. Vincent Hefter11 February 2009 at 00:27

    many thanks for your comments...keep taking the tablets (do you take the same ones as me?)

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  2. Andy Sewina11 February 2009 at 01:00

    Hi Vincent, thanks for visiting STG..
    The traffic keeps the smog count high and Gordon's Gin keeps me!

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  3. Joyce11 February 2009 at 02:12

    Thanks for your comment on my Valentine poetry. I really like your first poem a lot! I hope she says, 'Yes!'

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  4. Anonymous11 February 2009 at 03:13

    Valentine's is Saturday - the day after Friday the 13th, so a little less optimism in my approach.
    Naisaiku works well here.

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  5. Anonymous11 February 2009 at 04:26

    Thanks for participating in my Valentine's Day verse prompt!

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  6. Andy Sewina15 February 2009 at 00:23

    Hi Joyce, thanks for that, she hasn't said yes yet, but she did send me some nice flowers!

    Thanks Stan, I tried to show my outworkings here, the senryu and the old English approach and how they all boil down to the same thing.

    Hi Mad, thanks for the prompt. I enjoyed participating...
    Phew, that's bigger than Marmalade!

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