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Saturday, 4 April 2009

NaPoWriMo (4)

Written for NaPoWriMo day 4
Prompted at ReadWritePoem:

Does she wear make-up?
Hey, if the barn needs painting...
Slap on the lippy!
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4.15 am
the same time as yesterday
what woke you again?

What woke you again
the same time as yesterday?
4.15 am


Four-fifteen am
The same yesterday
WHAT WOKE YOU
the same yesterday
four-fifteen am
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9 comments:

  1. Love the idea of slapping on lippy to paint the barn - paint the barn, paint your face. What good logic. I use any painting job as an excuse to dress down.

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  2. Fun treatment of the words. I might have to give that a try!

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  3. Such a simple little comparison that says so much! Love it!

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  4. Must be the whisper of the wind :D

    lovely!!

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  5. must be the poetry prompts, waking you up... ;)

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  6. naisaiku have such a form in themselves... slap on the lippy... now that would make a good byline for cosmetics... nothin to do w/the sides of a barn

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  7. nice one...my partner does not use lip paint..but maybe she will help me paint the barn

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  8. Your senryu has me in hysterics.

    Thanks for all of your encouraging comments.

    Blessings,
    Linda
    THE BEAST’S BLUFF

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