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Friday, 23 April 2010

NaPoWriMo 2010 Day 23

NAPOWRIMO 2010 DAY 23
UNLIKELY COUPLES
Read Write Poem member Sage Cohen has a terrific suggestion for today’s poems: Write a poem in which you combine a speaker and an event that normally don’t go together (such as sports broadcasters and poetry writing), as Jay Leeming does in his poem, “Man Writes Poem.”
HERE'S MINE:

BATMAN AND ALICE
wOW! sPlaT! How did I get here? KerPow!
"Welcome to Wonderland," said Alice.
KerPlunk! Holy BatMobile! What is this place?
"You must have fallen down the rabbit hole," said Alice.

Where's my BatPhone? Where's my BatMobile gone?
I bet CatWoman had a hand in this!
Suffering tadpoles! How do I get outta here?
"Just defeat the Queen of Hearts," said Alice.

Ain't that the broad that made some tarts?
Blam! She sounds like some kinda poker hand!
I'll need an ace up my sleeve to beat her.
"Quick, drink some of this poison," said Alice.

Bah! You must think I'm the Joker! Or something?
This is darker than a Gotham subway!
PussyGalore! You've got big rats down here!
"That was my Cheshire Cat," said Alice.
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17 comments:

  1. Anonymous23 April 2010 at 15:44

    Temporal and communication breakdown w/ a little J Bond thrown in for good measure. I like it.

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  2. Dan23 April 2010 at 15:59

    Now that's a mash-up complete with the requisite lumps!

    Nice work.

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  3. Jeremiah's House23 April 2010 at 17:01

    I like it Andy

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  4. 1965 Footprints23 April 2010 at 17:02

    Holy &^%^(*&! You did it, man!

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  5. Anonymous23 April 2010 at 17:19

    This was awesome! Two of my favorite people! Quite an unlikely pairing indeed.

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  6. Anonymous23 April 2010 at 18:38

    This is great! You're incredibly imaginative, and your keep up the pace without it getting to be too much. Kudos!

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  7. Unknown23 April 2010 at 18:44

    You obviously had a misspent youth, Andy!

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  8. World So Wide23 April 2010 at 18:51

    That is indeed an unlikely couple! Had me laughing :)

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  9. flaubert23 April 2010 at 22:47

    Andy,
    Unlikely couple for sure! Well done for the prompt.
    Pamela

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  10. Stan Ski23 April 2010 at 23:52

    Great pairing - it makes Walrus and Carpenter seem perfectly normal.

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  11. Anonymous24 April 2010 at 00:38

    Very fun! Definitely an unlikely couple. :)

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  12. lucychili24 April 2010 at 01:14

    blustering bats
    and slithy troves
    great stuff =)

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  13. Wayne Pitchko24 April 2010 at 04:53

    nicely paired...Andy...and niciely written

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  14. Understanding Alice11 April 2011 at 10:26

    now that really messed with my head - briliant :)

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  15. Andy Sewina11 April 2011 at 16:49

    Hi Understanding Alice, glad you found this!

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  16. keiths ramblings7 January 2012 at 18:06

    Absolutely brilliant! Really glad I dropped by (It's been a while!)

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  17. Andy Sewina9 January 2012 at 00:23

    Thanks Keith, I'll have a butchers at Carry on Tuesday this week!

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