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Tuesday, 31 March 2009

Tuesday NaisaiKu.. Week Seven

Written for The NaisaiKu Challenge? Week Seven:

Fire screams siren
spring streams into lucid dreams
HARD DRIVE TO DRIVE HARD
Dreams lucid into streams spring
siren screams fire
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Dangerous
as playing with fire
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is playing with fire
dangerous
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7 comments:

  1. Anonymous31 March 2009 at 10:36

    perfect mirror imagery of words !! loved the form and flow here !

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  2. Anonymous31 March 2009 at 14:16

    This is a very effective Naisaiku. I love the internal rhyming in 'spring streams into lucid deams'/'Dreams lucid into streams spring'.

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  3. James31 March 2009 at 23:50

    I love the phrase and idea of lucid dreaming. "Hard drive to drive hard" - awesome.

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  4. SweetTalkingGuy..2 April 2009 at 21:28

    Hi Pretty You!! Thanks!!!

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  5. SweetTalkingGuy..2 April 2009 at 22:04

    Many thanks Carole, you're too kind!

    Hi James, lucid dreams are what I'm trying for!

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  6. zoya gautam4 April 2009 at 18:57

    ..such intelligent construction..many thanks..

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  7. LA Nickers6 April 2009 at 01:06

    Love it.

    What are the numbers? Have you written that many? ;-)

    Linda

    PLAYING WITH PUDDLES

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