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Today's haiku is a winner as well. I certainly like the rhythm in this piece. Nice last line.
This is a very nice haiku, by choosing your words you can hear the rain. Great.
And when it rains may there be a symphony!! The woodwind and percussion instruments would be playing!!
A thought provoking haiku. Nice.
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amazing line :)
And what is that.. phew.. I like it a lot..
Beautiful...waiting for the gods to sing..I pray for rain where I live...frighting to be experiencing rhythm without rhyme
I have front row seats waiting for the symphony to begin!!
Very good indeed! Nice one.
Enjoyed this one - I can feel the rain...
I've heard the Gods singing.
the last line sums up a haiku perfectly!!!
Beautiful! The last line is is a magic mix of contrast!
"Rhythm without rhyme" describes the art of haiku, does it not? :-)Rhythms here and here
Hi MMT, Here's one I wrote this month but didn't use:FOR MMTArtisanCreativityIs an art26092011/3
great last line, and like MMT says, describes the art of haiku. :)
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