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Thursday, 29 September 2011

The Height of Haiku Challenge, Day 29 - Rhythm

Welcome to Day 29 of The Height of Haiku Challenge, where your challenge is to write 30 haiku in 30 days. The prompt today is RHYTHM suggested by Yamini.

Here's mine:

RHYTHM

Rivers running dry
Waiting for the gods to sing
Rhythm without rhyme
29092011

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18 comments:

  1. The Write Girl29 September 2011 at 03:05

    Today's haiku is a winner as well. I certainly like the rhythm in this piece. Nice last line.

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  2. Chèvrefeuille29 September 2011 at 09:40

    This is a very nice haiku, by choosing your words you can hear the rain. Great.

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  3. Nanka29 September 2011 at 11:38

    And when it rains may there be a symphony!! The woodwind and percussion instruments would be playing!!

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  4. Jinksy29 September 2011 at 12:01

    A thought provoking haiku. Nice.

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  5. Nabeel Noorullah29 September 2011 at 13:12

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  6. Anonymous29 September 2011 at 13:13

    amazing line :)

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  7. Ramesh Sood29 September 2011 at 13:13

    And what is that.. phew.. I like it a lot..

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  8. Susie Clevenger29 September 2011 at 16:29

    Beautiful...waiting for the gods to sing..I pray for rain where I live...frighting to be experiencing rhythm without rhyme

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  9. Anonymous29 September 2011 at 17:32

    I have front row seats waiting for the symphony to begin!!

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  10. Saras29 September 2011 at 19:41

    Very good indeed! Nice one.

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  11. Anonymous29 September 2011 at 20:37

    Enjoyed this one - I can feel the rain...

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  12. Richard Cody29 September 2011 at 20:55

    I've heard the Gods singing.

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  13. LSH29 September 2011 at 22:39

    the last line sums up a haiku perfectly!!!

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  14. Gemma Wiseman30 September 2011 at 00:10

    Beautiful! The last line is is a magic mix of contrast!

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  15. Magical Mystical Teacher30 September 2011 at 01:55

    "Rhythm without rhyme" describes the art of haiku, does it not? :-)



    Rhythms here and here

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  16. Andy Sewina30 September 2011 at 02:15

    Hi MMT, Here's one I wrote this month but didn't use:

    FOR MMT

    Artisan
    Creativity
    Is an art
    26092011/3

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  17. dsnake130 September 2011 at 07:48

    great last line, and like MMT says, describes the art of haiku. :)

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  18. Andy Sewina6 October 2011 at 10:08

    Sorry again, some comments on this post ended up in the spam pile and were deleted.

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