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Thursday 29 September 2011

The Height of Haiku Challenge, Day 29 - Rhythm

Welcome to Day 29 of The Height of Haiku Challenge, where your challenge is to write 30 haiku in 30 days. The prompt today is RHYTHM suggested by Yamini.

Here's mine:

RHYTHM

Rivers running dry
Waiting for the gods to sing
Rhythm without rhyme
29092011

18 comments:

  1. Today's haiku is a winner as well. I certainly like the rhythm in this piece. Nice last line.

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  2. This is a very nice haiku, by choosing your words you can hear the rain. Great.

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  3. And when it rains may there be a symphony!! The woodwind and percussion instruments would be playing!!

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  4. A thought provoking haiku. Nice.

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  6. And what is that.. phew.. I like it a lot..

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  7. Beautiful...waiting for the gods to sing..I pray for rain where I live...frighting to be experiencing rhythm without rhyme

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  8. I have front row seats waiting for the symphony to begin!!

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  9. Enjoyed this one - I can feel the rain...

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  10. the last line sums up a haiku perfectly!!!

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  11. Beautiful! The last line is is a magic mix of contrast!

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  12. "Rhythm without rhyme" describes the art of haiku, does it not? :-)



    Rhythms here and here

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  13. Hi MMT, Here's one I wrote this month but didn't use:

    FOR MMT

    Artisan
    Creativity
    Is an art
    26092011/3

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  14. great last line, and like MMT says, describes the art of haiku. :)

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  15. Sorry again, some comments on this post ended up in the spam pile and were deleted.

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