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Wednesday, 22 October 2008

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Retrospective of a Myth.
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IN FAGINS DEN

It’s like Fagin’s den in ‘ere love, let’s shoot…

‘old yer ‘orses guv, I’ve still got some gin.

Does yer ‘ubbby know that yer out up west?

Leave it out, it wus ‘im who sent me ‘ere.

Well the sooner yer drink up the better.

Yer won’t ‘urt me will yer gov? I’m not well.

Yer look kosher to me darlin’, what’s up?

Nuffin’ much, I’m just out to earn a crust.

Well yer can trust me love, I’m a doctor!

Cor blimey! Yer not that Jack the fingy?

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7 comments:

  1. The original 'sweet talking guy'?

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  2. Hi Stan, what a ripping yarn that would make..

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  3. oh that was simply delicious!

    jorc

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  4. oh that was simply delicious!

    jorc

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  5. Thank you Jorc, what a delightful comment!

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  6. I want to write a song with your words! This would be a GREAT song.

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  7. Hi Lisa, phew! I tried singing this in the shower but my cockney accent is terrible. If you really want it you can have it, take it away - it's yours!
    I just realised that you come from Big Sur, I remember many years ago reading Richard Brautigan's 'A Confederate General from Big Sur'
    Nice to talk to you!
    Andy

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