Prompted at ReadWritePoem and
posted to The NaisaiKu Challenge?
Trip of a lifetime
Travel at the speed of thought
WHY WAIT FOR WINTER
Travel at the speed of thought
Trip of a lifetime
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Travel at the speed of thought
WHY WAIT FOR WINTER
Travel at the speed of thought
Trip of a lifetime
140409
Yes, why wait for winter indeed!
ReplyDeletenice! i like the why wait for winter also. keep seeing these naisaiku. may try these after napo
ReplyDeleteI'm unsure as to how many lines a Naisaiku should have. Is it 5 or is it 7 or can it be either?
ReplyDeleteHi Gautami, I'm waiting for summer, right now!
ReplyDeleteHi Swiss, we'd love you to take The NaisaiKu Challenge? Good luck with NaPoWriMo...
Hi Carole, five lines or seven it doesn't matter, the difference is only that if you use seven lines it is a Haiku plus a central CAPITALISED TITLE followed by a reverse Haiku.
ReplyDeleteWith five lines the third line of the haiku becomes the TITLE AND the first line of the reverse rolled into one.
At the end of the day it's just a bit of fun! BTW I loved the one that you did and it was spot on!
Please note: our interpretation of Haiku is quite a broad school and we leave it to the writer to determine what he or she thinks might qualify. Enjoy!
ya got the knack of traveling thoughts... im still rollin around in my head the nakisakiku... or somethin like that... you make it seem so eeeez
ReplyDeleteI love, "travel at the speed of thought." Perfect!
ReplyDeleteAll these Naisaiku: I'm going to have to try one. I also like: "travel at the speed of thought."
ReplyDeleteSuch an interesting form. I enjoyed the read.
ReplyDeletenow that is a driving anthem, for sure!
ReplyDeleteOh how I wish we could travel at the speed of thought - it would make family road trips ever so much more bearable.
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by!
I LOVE how you did this! I wish I had the patience LOL. I've done Haikus and Tankas but this one may be out of my reach :os.
ReplyDeleteGREAT job!
http://lori102870.blogspot.com/2009/04/turn-my-keythree-in-one-blogby-me.html
The best way to journey, in the mind.
ReplyDeleteI love how this captures the excitement of a trip, how thoughts race ahead of cars.
ReplyDeletetraveling at the speed of thought.. something to think about :)
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