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Saturday, 2 April 2011

NaPoWriMo 2011 Day Two

Here's a little song that I offer for Day Two.

ETERNALLY
eternally through time I'm still falling
falling out with you 'I love you lady'
lady of the night please take my candle
candle wax will stick like glue - me to you

you know I love you I already said
said more than you wanted to hear I'm sure
sure as eggs are eggs - don't poached just beat fried?
fried rice and steamed veg followed by some pud!

pud would be good on a night that's this cold
cold like your heart and the soul that you sold
sold your body sold your mind to someone
someone else that is, never to me though

though you now know that I would take you home
home to my home with me eternally
Repeat
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13 comments:

  1. Stan Ski2 April 2011 at 14:35

    Ay ay ay ay... the beat is crazy...

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  2. Anonymous2 April 2011 at 14:48

    If food be the music of love...you nailed it :)

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  3. vivinfrance2 April 2011 at 15:02

    But it's so sad.

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  4. anthonynorth2 April 2011 at 16:03

    A feast of a romance.

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  5. brenda w2 April 2011 at 17:32

    It is sad. "Love unrequited, robs me of my rest." Gilbert and Sullivan

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  6. Anonymous2 April 2011 at 19:00

    Oh, to be loved, so....

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  7. Anonymous2 April 2011 at 19:03

    I love the tempo in this, Andy. Very, very nice!

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  8. flaubert2 April 2011 at 20:24

    Reads beautifully, Andy.

    Pamela

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  9. Andy Sewina3 April 2011 at 00:45

    Hi Stan, sucu sucu to you too!

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  10. Andy Sewina3 April 2011 at 00:58

    Thanks Tilly Bud!

    Hi VivinFrance, I love sad songs!!

    Thanks Tony, I know you know about these things!!

    Hi Brenda, thanks for the quote!

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  11. Andy Sewina3 April 2011 at 01:24

    Hi Paula, thanks for that!

    Thank you zouxzoux!

    Hi Pamela, thanks for reading this!!

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  12. Anonymous4 April 2011 at 02:30

    you did superb job here.


    feel free to share 1 to 3 random poems with us today.

    our poetry potluck welcome first time participants
    with open arms...

    cheers.

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  13. Madeleine Begun Kane4 April 2011 at 09:45

    Well sung. :)

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