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Tuesday, 27 September 2011
The Height of Haiku Challenge, Day 27 - Poise
Welcome to Day 27 of The Height of Haiku Challenge, where your challenge is to write 30 haiku in 30 days. The prompt today is POISE suggested by Tarang.
Here's mine:
POISE
From one small acorn Poised and ready to survive Acres of green oak 27092011
Acorn and oaks ...hmmmm gives a nice smoky flavour to the Haiku. Great poise in the hard and durable oak trees, which can survive for thousands of years!!
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Like it very much. It has not just the form of the haku, but the feel as well. Excellent post.
ReplyDeleteAcorn and oaks ...hmmmm gives a nice smoky flavour to the Haiku. Great poise in the hard and durable oak trees, which can survive for thousands of years!!
ReplyDeleteI can see the forest growing before my eyes! I like how you approached the prompt!
ReplyDeletePoised and poise
Great take on the word poise...I have an oak in my front yard...I grumble at acorns, but your words are so powerfully true
ReplyDeleteThis is powerful and lovely!!
ReplyDeleteexcellent take on the theme!
ReplyDeletefrom a small acorn, a mighty oak grows.