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Tuesday 2 December 2008

TOP prompt

Two different versions of my Cottonopolis thingy!
LITTLE MISS
Little Miss Cotton Cottonopolis
rocks her baby at the factory
in the cradle of industry.
It’ll soon be noon in boom and bust
And she’s just twenty-four hours ahead
She knows that by this time tomorrow
that the whole world will follow
every single word that she said.
And she said:
We’re going to build a canal to bring
coal to town and to link us to the sea.
At noon the next day
the whole world laughed
and said that she was daft
but they waited and they watched
and they copied her by half past three.
And she said:
We’re going to build about
two thousand mills each one eight floors high
with chimney stacks that scrape the sky
we’ll power the looms in boom and bust
with the new technology that we trust
and we’ll fuel those steam engines with coal
that we’ll cart up the Bridgewater canal and
the finished goods we’ll send across the sea.
At noon the next day
the whole world laughed
and said that she was daft
but they waited and they watched
and they copied her by half past three.
And she said:
We’re going to build a passenger railway station
and lay tracks to every city in the nation
and build new dormitory towns to house the hoi polloi.
At noon the next day
the whole world laughed
and said that she was daft
but they waited and they watched
and they copied her by half past three.
And she said:
We’re going to build a university
and a new town hall
a free library and art gallery
and public parks for all.
At noon the next day
the whole world laughed
and said that she was daft
but they waited and they watched
and they copied her by half past three.
And she said:
We’re going to build a ship canal
so ships can come to us
thirty-five miles from the sea.
At noon the next day
no one laughed
or said that she was daft
but they waited and they watched
and the ship canal officially opened in 1894.
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First free public Library, Manchester 1653
First real canal (not river assisted)
The Bridgewater Canal Manchester 1761
First steam powered mill Arkwright’s, Manchester 1783
First passenger Railway Station, Manchester 1830
Manchester Ship Canal officially opened May 21st. 1894 by Queen Victoria
First Red Brick University, Manchester 1824
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WHATSIT?
Little Miss Crochet
up from Whatsit?
queues outside the
monastery gates for
bread and honey and
her baby cries for the
milk that she’s not got
and across town the
dark satanic mills
rise up eight floors
above the cut and
the phallic chimneys
tower one hundred
and eighty foot into
the air belching smog
that hurts your eyes
and the bargees down
below are blindly carting
coals to fuel the loom
in bust and boom
and even as the tracks
are going down for the
worlds first passenger
railway station
across the road she still
shares half the basement
with eight children and two
drunken and abusive men
there’s no sanitation yet
they dump and hit and miss
in the river and kill the fish
almost next door to the
Italianate warehouse fronts
of the Nouveau riche that line
in eighteen twenty nine
the streets of Cottonopolis
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Cottonopolis = nickname for Manchester UK in the nineteenth century
Bargee = boatman on a canal barge
Cut = canal
Whatsit? = the countryside

19 comments:

  1. Wow! Thanks for this working class view of the Industrial Revolution. I knew it from my research, but your poem catches the heartache.

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  2. Amazing artistic verses, based on real research. So well done!

    Linda

    SIMPLY SNICKERS
    Nickers and Ink

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  3. And wasn't the first computer developed at UMIST?
    Must have been a year or two later - but another Manchester 'first', I think.

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  4. You really do have such a wonderful ear. The opening lines--Little Miss Crochet up from Whatsit?--grab me immediately, and this piece doesn't let go of you until the end.

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  5. Excellent - and we're still at it! Hmm.

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  6. That was great, but you've missed Corrie, The Guardian and Oasis as great successes.
    Well, two of 'em, anyway.

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  7. Thanks Bluebethley!

    Hi Linda - Nickers and Ink, I hope I didn't get it too wrong!

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  8. Hi Stan, that'd be the first programmable computer 'The Baby' in 1948 which was about one hundred and nineteen years after my poem - there is a working replica of it in The Science and Industry museum in Manchester.

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  9. Many thanks DP, I love it when a rhyme comes together!

    Hi Sue@Tumblewords, Thanks!

    The thing I was trying to point out was how quickly people in different places copy new technology. For example the railways!

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  10. Hi Anthony, I think I mentioned Liam and Noel in a recent poem, but I was trying to concentrate on world firsts here like The first Rolls Royce and the first Trades Union Congress. Of course The Bee Gees originally came from Manchester too but not a lot of people know that...

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  11. i can picture out how busy the scene was. but it was cleverly written and there are some internal rhymes that are enjoyable

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  12. I like this history you're writing. Will there be more to come?

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  13. Hi Richard, I hadn't planned any more but you never know, with this post production society and the canvas of our industrial heritage all around me for inspiration, I might just.

    Anyway, I've tried a few times to leave a comment on your bloggage and it won't work for me. I get to the silly word thing and there's nowhere else to go, no submit button. What's happening?

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  14. A clever post and astutely written. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thanks.

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  15. Many thanks Dave, that means so much to me.

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  16. Very inspired writing here, Andy. I like to be educated when I am reading, and you have done that very nicely. Cheers.

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  17. Loved both the poems. I grew up in Sale. The Bridgewater canal and the electric trains (now the Metro)into Manchester ran at right angles to the road where I lived. I've lived in the south for many years but a son and grandson living on the edge of Salford have meant more frequent visits up north. I still feel that I'm a northerner at heart.

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  18. Hi Carole, I used to live in Sale when I was a kid too, in fact most of my family still live there. I had a friend who used to live in a street like you describe near the footbridge on Oldfield road. Small world!

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