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Tuesday, 11 December 2007
WI14 The Moment
THE MOMENT A lifetime seems like a decade seems like a month. Seems like a week seems like a day seems like an hour. Seems like a minute seems like this. The moment that seems like life starts… WI14-101207
A minimalist view. Indeed, we can innumerate all the moments we can remember and cheerish but everything really could be singled out to now, the present, and it is important, special, a gift.
Moments does take us the full circle of life and then back again, just like the time you have defined here, and always moving forward...beautiful take. Thanks,
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A well defined moment...
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so close and yet so far... i wonder if i will ever reflect on today and wonder,, where has the time gone.....
ReplyDeleteI like the compressing nature of the poem.
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xo
Taking us to the essence of the moment. Each day made of such moments.
ReplyDeleteYou've established a nice flow. I wonder why you didn't break it into lines. With the right line breaks it will make quite the poem.
ReplyDeleteYou sure have captured the essence... nice..
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A moment defined. Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteThanks for all the visits.
ReplyDeleteA minimalist view. Indeed, we can innumerate all the moments we can remember and cheerish but everything really could be singled out to now, the present, and it is important, special, a gift.
ReplyDeleteI wish you well.
~ Jeques
You said in one paragraph than most who rattle on for pages and pages.
ReplyDeleteThanks for taking the time to visit mine
begins or ends....
ReplyDeleteMoments does take us the full circle of life and then back again, just like the time you have defined here, and always moving forward...beautiful take.
Thanks,
UL
Very cleverly done. Nice one.
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