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Tuesday, 11 December 2007

WI14 The Moment

THE MOMENT
A lifetime seems like a decade seems like a month. Seems like a week seems like a day seems like an hour. Seems like a minute seems like this. The moment that seems like life starts…
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12 comments:

  1. A well defined moment...


    unconnected moments

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  2. so close and yet so far... i wonder if i will ever reflect on today and wonder,, where has the time gone.....

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  3. Rose Dewy Knickers11 December 2007 at 14:34

    I like the compressing nature of the poem.

    Rose

    xo

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  4. Taking us to the essence of the moment. Each day made of such moments.

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  5. You've established a nice flow. I wonder why you didn't break it into lines. With the right line breaks it will make quite the poem.

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  6. You sure have captured the essence... nice..
    Moment

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  7. A minimalist view. Indeed, we can innumerate all the moments we can remember and cheerish but everything really could be singled out to now, the present, and it is important, special, a gift.

    I wish you well.

    ~ Jeques

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  8. http://blogforth.com12 December 2007 at 02:40

    You said in one paragraph than most who rattle on for pages and pages.
    Thanks for taking the time to visit mine

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  9. begins or ends....

    Moments does take us the full circle of life and then back again, just like the time you have defined here, and always moving forward...beautiful take.
    Thanks,

    UL

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