Welcome to Day 2 of
The Height of Haiku Challenge, where your challenge is to write 30 haiku in 30 days, with the themes given
here. The prompt today and #60 overall is
Mirror given by
Priyanka.
Here's mine:
MIRROR
Kissing the mirror
She looks at his reflection
Wishing he would breathe
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Now THAT'S a different kind of mirror--one that reflects not the one who peers in, but someone else. Interesting...
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Magic mirror that reflects who she wants to see most? :) Nice.
ReplyDeleteAn intriguing haiku Andy.
ReplyDeleteThought it was great.
Made me chuckle. A girls dream living in the mirror.
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Reflections of the mind in the mirror...Absolutely marvelous!!
ReplyDeleteLove the disjoint; sharp as glass. Bravo.
ReplyDeleteLike that picture in her mind ~ nice haiku
ReplyDeletehmmm getting lost in a reflection, envisioning what she wants most? I see big sacks of money in my reflection!
ReplyDeleteThis is the second haiku I've read today that called to mind the Harry Potter series... I like the idea of the mirror reflecting her desire instead of her image. :)
ReplyDeleteP.S. - I like your anagrammed pen name. I may have to try that myself.