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Friday 2 September 2011

The Height of Haiku Challenge, Day 2 - Mirror

Welcome to Day 2 of The Height of Haiku Challenge, where your challenge is to write 30 haiku in 30 days, with the themes given here. The prompt today and #60 overall is Mirror given by Priyanka.

Here's mine:

MIRROR

Kissing the mirror
She looks at his reflection
Wishing he would breathe
02092011

9 comments:

  1. Now THAT'S a different kind of mirror--one that reflects not the one who peers in, but someone else. Interesting...
    Day 2: Mirror

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  2. Magic mirror that reflects who she wants to see most? :) Nice.

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  3. An intriguing haiku Andy.
    Thought it was great.

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  4. Made me chuckle. A girls dream living in the mirror.
    Blessings

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  5. Reflections of the mind in the mirror...Absolutely marvelous!!

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  6. Love the disjoint; sharp as glass. Bravo.

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  7. Like that picture in her mind ~ nice haiku

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  8. hmmm getting lost in a reflection, envisioning what she wants most? I see big sacks of money in my reflection!

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  9. This is the second haiku I've read today that called to mind the Harry Potter series... I like the idea of the mirror reflecting her desire instead of her image. :)

    P.S. - I like your anagrammed pen name. I may have to try that myself.

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