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Tuesday 6 September 2011

The Height of Haiku Challenge, Day 7 - Hypnotic

Welcome to Day 7 of The Height of Haiku Challenge, where your challenge is to write 30 haiku in 30 days, with the themes given here. The prompt today and #65 overall is HYPNOTIC suggested by Tarang.

Here's mine:

HYPNOTIC

Who mesmerised you
Blah blink hypnotic blink blah
You mesmerised who
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Here's my 3WW piece.

18 comments:

  1. terrific, I used somewhat the same idea of repetition, very hypnotic write

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  2. Clever palindrome in a Haiku form!! :)

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  3. Very clever and a great read. Thanks.

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  4. This is clever and fun...did you get an answer?

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  5. Interest form.Very clever of you my friend.


    Melanie

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  6. You've caught the theme completely: great haiku.

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  7. When I'm done reading this you'll clap your hands three times & I will be fully awake, but I'll remember nothing of what happened, right?

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  8. Hi Ron, You're back in the room!

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  9. Cute Andy lots of fun to read!

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  10. a haiku palindrome, that's a fun play, very nice

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  11. I didn't realise it was a palindrome until I read the comments.

    Nicely done.

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  12. a fun palindrome :) well written!

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  13. Love this Andy. I like the way the written haiku is shaped like an eye too.

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