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Saturday, 3 January 2009

Sunday Scribblings "For richer or poorer"

Written for Sunday Scribblings

For richer or poorer prompt:

NICE

LIFE

wife knife

trouble strife

bubble bubble

double trouble

muddle muddle

rouble rubble

golden token

kitchen wife

richer poorer

nice life

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19 comments:

  1. gautami tripathy3 January 2009 at 14:24

    Like the pair of words. Very apt!

    For richer and/or poorer

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  2. Dave King3 January 2009 at 14:25

    Ingenious - and it reads well. Incredible!

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  3. Anonymous3 January 2009 at 21:29

    this kinda word play is fun!

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  4. Michelle3 January 2009 at 21:43

    I like! Scary how well wife, knife, and strife rhyme! Haha! :)

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  5. Andy Sewina3 January 2009 at 21:57

    Hi Gautami, people seem to be bound in pairs for richer or poorer, perhaps.

    Hi Dave, they say it takes a genius to spot inguenity, I think you are incredible too!

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  6. Andy Sewina3 January 2009 at 21:59

    Hi Artpredator, fun, fun, fun, all the way to the pun!

    Hi Michelle, thanks for visiting STG.. It is a bit scary when you think about it!

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  7. anthonynorth3 January 2009 at 22:05

    Excellent word play. Of course, life goes with wife, too ;-)

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  8. Andy Sewina3 January 2009 at 22:10

    Hi Anthony thanks, I didn't put wife with life because that would be a sentence.

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  9. paisley3 January 2009 at 23:42

    very cleverly done!!!!!

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  10. floreta4 January 2009 at 01:34

    this is a fun piece! i like it.. and your explanation being bound in pairs to fit the wordplay.. perfect!

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  11. Anonymous4 January 2009 at 10:48

    Gleeful grin :D. The rhyming word pairs make this delightful despite harsh reality and shows the cycle nicely! *very* creative.

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  12. Tumblewords:4 January 2009 at 19:46

    This is great - cleverly done and yes, even a little scary with knife, wife and strife! Since I'm not one, it works fine! Fun, fun...

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  13. Anonymous5 January 2009 at 00:06

    Thanks Paisley, Jodi, I love your writing!

    Hi Floreta, Yep, I had fun paring this down (into pairs).

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  14. Anonymous5 January 2009 at 00:13

    Hi Gel, hope I wasn't too harsh, I don't want to upset anyone, too much.

    Thanks Sue@Tumblewords, I suppose it was a bit 'scary mary' now you put it like that. Boo!!! PS I just read your thingy about happiness over money - nice work!

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  15. Giggles5 January 2009 at 03:36

    Excellent, wiggle wiggle I just got to giggle!!

    Loved it!

    Peace Giggles

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  16. Anonymous5 January 2009 at 06:52

    Jiggle jiggle,
    peace to you too, Giggles.
    Andy

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  17. Anonymous6 January 2009 at 10:28

    No, you weren't too harsh and besides, you need to write for yourself and not worry about our feelings. (I have posted very "dark" poetry in the past. People do understand, or they skip it and don't comment. It's your blog!)

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  18. Anonymous6 January 2009 at 22:21

    Well said--in a humorous way of course!

    Interesting how marriage can always be a twist of coins--heads or tails!

    I enjoyed reading this.

    Also, I apologie for taking forever to return the favor by visiting your poetry blog as I've been busy with holiday aftermath. And I'd like to kindly thank you for stopping by mine! :)

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  19. Anonymous7 January 2009 at 02:01

    Hi Gel, many thanks for the kind words!

    Lotus, Glad you enjoyed it and Happy New Year!

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