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Monday 9 February 2009

Monday Poetry Train Revisited #14

Written for Monday Poetry Train Revisited: "Have you jumped onboard yet?"

NaisaiKu..
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Time won't wait
winter gravitates
towards spring
WINTER GRAVITATES
towards spring
winter gravitates
time won't wait
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17 comments:

  1. Very true and it gets more true with each year.

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  2. That wee verse has something going for it!

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  3. Very true and well said. Like this.

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  4. Is that why it's already heading for the middle of February? I've barely got my head registering the new year.

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  5. It's getting there - though a slight hiccup at the moment.

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  6. loved the repetition here. spring when are you going to come? hehe

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  7. I like the way this one seems to have a feeling of acceleration to it.

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  8. I like the way this one seems to have a feeling of acceleration to it.

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  9. i have already said i like this form. i love theway you use it, turning and turning, envloping new view with each turn

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  10. A lot can be said in few words - and then the repetition really sends the message home.

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  11. Do you ever wonder what we'd do if "time DID wait?"

    Interesting, just last week, it was icy and snowy here. Then a few days later, I looked toward the tops of the VERY tall trees in our forest behind our house and saw buds! Spring IS in the air.

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  12. Thank God this happens...I really hate the cold weather! Your words accentuate the inevitability of this change of season...

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  13. Hmm interesting!!
    Fleeting time is something i cant take...especially when ur life seems so beautiful.
    Loved this write.

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  14. I like these naisaiku of yours...

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  15. Hi Everybody, what I meant to say was, thank you for commenting here - it means so much to me!!!

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