Friday, 10 April 2009

NaPoWriMo (10) Read WritePoem

Written for NaPoWriMo day ten
and posted to ReadWritePoem

He came 'cos he was sent like we came to die, he came to show us why.

He came like we came
but he came to show us why
we came and to die

Like we came to do
but I don't know why do you
remember? me too!

Good Friday
we crucified him
JESUS CHRIST
we crucified him
Good Friday
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11 comments:

Dave King said...

I like it, but I don't know why.

zoya gautam said...

.. the rickshaw puller
pulling his own crucifix
but how can that be
could something have crucified
the rickshaw puller ..

Deeptesh said...

Rhythmical and meaningful.Loved the tinge of irony towards the end.I saw a film on Christ today and really I was in tears.

Pam said...

Once crucified and always crucified-- we seem to never stop.

Erin Davis said...

The remembering his the most important part (and the easiest to forget).

Lori said...

Not sure I really get the question, but I like the poem LOL. A great tribute to Christ on the day of his death/life.

http://lori102870.blogspot.com/2009/04/stitch-in-timenapowrimo-10by-me.html

Wayne Pitchko said...

interesting...its good friday...i like it also...but also dont know really why....but hey thats what is so great about poetry...keep writing my friend

Linda - Nickers and Ink said...

Good Friday -

The paradox of faith.

ON STORMS AND SORROWS – GOOD FRIDAY TORNADO

gautami tripathy said...

I too like it and I do know why!

angie said...

nice job!

jack sender said...

is this
Andy?
keep this one
handy.
it's a
dandy.