and posted to ReadWritePoem
He came 'cos he was sent like we came to die, he came to show us why.
He came like we came
but he came to show us why
we came and to die
Like we came to do
but I don't know why do you
remember? me too!
Good Friday
we crucified him
JESUS CHRIST
we crucified him
Good Friday
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we crucified him
JESUS CHRIST
we crucified him
Good Friday
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I like it, but I don't know why.
ReplyDelete.. the rickshaw puller
ReplyDeletepulling his own crucifix
but how can that be
could something have crucified
the rickshaw puller ..
Rhythmical and meaningful.Loved the tinge of irony towards the end.I saw a film on Christ today and really I was in tears.
ReplyDeleteOnce crucified and always crucified-- we seem to never stop.
ReplyDeleteThe remembering his the most important part (and the easiest to forget).
ReplyDeleteNot sure I really get the question, but I like the poem LOL. A great tribute to Christ on the day of his death/life.
ReplyDeletehttp://lori102870.blogspot.com/2009/04/stitch-in-timenapowrimo-10by-me.html
interesting...its good friday...i like it also...but also dont know really why....but hey thats what is so great about poetry...keep writing my friend
ReplyDeleteGood Friday -
ReplyDeleteThe paradox of faith.
ON STORMS AND SORROWS – GOOD FRIDAY TORNADO
I too like it and I do know why!
ReplyDeletenice job!
ReplyDeleteis this
ReplyDeleteAndy?
keep this one
handy.
it's a
dandy.