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Friday 10 April 2009

NaPoWriMo (10) Read WritePoem

Written for NaPoWriMo day ten
and posted to ReadWritePoem

He came 'cos he was sent like we came to die, he came to show us why.

He came like we came
but he came to show us why
we came and to die

Like we came to do
but I don't know why do you
remember? me too!

Good Friday
we crucified him
JESUS CHRIST
we crucified him
Good Friday
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11 comments:

  1. I like it, but I don't know why.

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  2. .. the rickshaw puller
    pulling his own crucifix
    but how can that be
    could something have crucified
    the rickshaw puller ..

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  3. Rhythmical and meaningful.Loved the tinge of irony towards the end.I saw a film on Christ today and really I was in tears.

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  4. Once crucified and always crucified-- we seem to never stop.

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  5. The remembering his the most important part (and the easiest to forget).

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  6. Not sure I really get the question, but I like the poem LOL. A great tribute to Christ on the day of his death/life.

    http://lori102870.blogspot.com/2009/04/stitch-in-timenapowrimo-10by-me.html

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  7. interesting...its good friday...i like it also...but also dont know really why....but hey thats what is so great about poetry...keep writing my friend

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  8. is this
    Andy?
    keep this one
    handy.
    it's a
    dandy.

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