Inspired by Lou Reed Vicious and
3WW CXXXIII
the words this week are:
Allure, Perch and Vivid
Here's mine:
Yeah, you're so vivid
you allure me every hour
Don't fall off your perch
FLOWER
Don't fall off your perch
you allure me every hour
Yeah, you're so vivid
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you allure me every hour
Don't fall off your perch
FLOWER
Don't fall off your perch
you allure me every hour
Yeah, you're so vivid
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20 comments:
bea-uti-ful naturally ;)
I like how this builds, then cascades with the NaiSaiKu form. Great stuff.
And I'm still trying to figure out how to load you onto the 3WW blogroll. Since I didn't create the blog, there's no place for me to edit the links. I'll ask Bone to see if he can do it.
Wonderful...and perfect for spring.
See! Now you are writing poetry about..well, you know who!
Wendy Naisa warned me..
split moment
Allure me more with your Naisaiku.
Pollination has never been so sexy :-)
Hi Pretty You!! Many thanks!
Thanks Thom, and yeah it would be nice to be on the blog roll!
Hi FP, maybe I was thinking of your profile flower!
Hi Flower (only joking) Gautami,
I did write one for you but you haven't found it yet!
Did you know that if you add 'ol' to Flower you get follower! (hint!)
I love it. Very Lou Reedish actually
Sweet.
i am impressed
Hi Jeeves, thanks for coming by!
Tony, "sex is the bottom line!" Who said that?
Thanks Pia, that is a compliment!
Thanks Angel!
Hi Quin Browne, you're too kind!
I like the flow and vivid imagery in this one...
ahh good one! I dont want the flower to fall down too!
These three words were made for you. I just love 'Don't fall off your perch'.
love flowers. enjoyed this.
wow...short and sweet...isn't it beautiful..
keep writing :)
Good use of style and double prompt.
Well done my friend,
lov3-bd
I'm looking for the music that goes with these word. It seems they should be put to music but I it's just beyond my hearing.
It is beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
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