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Tuesday, 19 February 2008

TOP Romantic..

From my pub-poetry archive!
StraightTalkingStreetTalkingSweetTalkingGuy..

JANET OR JAYNE?
(SOUNDS LIKE JANITOR JANE)
I was strolling down a country lane
when I saw a girl so I asked her name
she said Janet! or was it Jayne?

Janet or Jayne? Janet or Jayne?
did she say Janet! or did she say Jayne?

The next time I went down that lovers lane
she was standing there again
I said Janet? she said Jayne!

Janet or Jayne? Janet or Jayne?
did she say Janet! or did she say Jayne?

So that was the end of my lovers lane
I simply forgot to remember her name!
did she say Janet! or did she say Jayne?

Janet or Jayne? Janet or Jayne?
did she say Janet? No, she said Jayne!
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16 comments:

  1. you should of stuck with "hey baby...."

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  2. Men! They can't even remember names!

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  3. Ah, Gautami - I can never remember names, either! Of course, in the southern US, women can get away with sweetie, honey, sugar... so that helps!

    This was a great, funny little piece - thank you!

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  4. At least he remembered it started with a J. Give the poor guy some credit. ;)

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  5. Well I never have problems remembering names, Fred :-)

    Nicely done.

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  6. LOL - How clever and fun this is - it could happen...it probably has! Nicely done!

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  7. I needed a little chuckle right about now! Thanks!

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  8. I love it! What a great poem. I love your site, I'll be back for more.

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  9. Hi Everybody, thanks for all the comments, I'm trying to visit as many blogs as I can to find out what all this romance is about!

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  10. I can never remember a name but I can always forget a face.

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  11. Fun read. Bouncy. Paisley's right. Maybe you should have said something like, "Hey Toots." She would then have slapped you and screamed, "My name is....!" And you'd have remembered it.

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  12. Hi Sweettalking Guy
    How funny is this! from a womans point of view maybe next time just call her beautiful! :-)

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  13. Thanks Rethabile, That's good advice..

    Hi Stacey, Aren't all women beautiful? The trouble is I wouldn't have had a story to tell if I had called her something else!

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  14. I loved the poem. It was fun and I could actually picture someone muttering the words to themselves while racking their brains to decide on the name [:D]

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