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Monday, 13 April 2009

NaPoWriMo (13) Monday Poetry Train Revisited

Written for NaPoWriMo day thirteen
and posted at Monday Poetry Train Revisited

whatamigonnado?

thirteen is left right left

but I wanna right left right

try as I might I can't

start or end on right

left right left leaves me

stuck on thirteen with you

whatamigonnado?

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7 comments:

  1. Sherri B.13 April 2009 at 13:47

    lol...very cleverly done! I especially loved your 'whatamigonnado'.

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  2. anthonynorth13 April 2009 at 15:32

    Now that was neat :-)

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  3. gautami tripathy13 April 2009 at 17:10

    I say, sit tight!

    LOL!

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  4. Wayne Pitchko13 April 2009 at 23:30

    nice...."sit tight" or move on just keep writing

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  5. desert rat14 April 2009 at 00:31

    I say take a chance and go in that new direction! What's the worst that can happen? (I s'pose you could get lost in the maze...)

    Thanks for the Saturday Scribes plug, btw!

    cheers
    -dr

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  6. Winnie the poohi15 April 2009 at 23:31

    whats with left n right ? I didnt get it erm...

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  7. SweetTalkingGuy..15 April 2009 at 23:56

    Thanks for all the coments - this is such a busy time for everybody with NaPoWriMo in full swing!

    Hi Winnie the poohi,
    Left, right, left, right, left!
    It's a marching thing, You count left-one, right-two, left-three, right-four etc. Therefore, thirteen would be the left foot. Hope this helps!

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