and posted at Monday Poetry Train Revisited
whatamigonnado?
thirteen is left right left
but I wanna right left right
try as I might I can't
start or end on right
left right left leaves me
stuck on thirteen with you
whatamigonnado?
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7 comments:
lol...very cleverly done! I especially loved your 'whatamigonnado'.
Now that was neat :-)
I say, sit tight!
LOL!
nice...."sit tight" or move on just keep writing
I say take a chance and go in that new direction! What's the worst that can happen? (I s'pose you could get lost in the maze...)
Thanks for the Saturday Scribes plug, btw!
cheers
-dr
whats with left n right ? I didnt get it erm...
Thanks for all the coments - this is such a busy time for everybody with NaPoWriMo in full swing!
Hi Winnie the poohi,
Left, right, left, right, left!
It's a marching thing, You count left-one, right-two, left-three, right-four etc. Therefore, thirteen would be the left foot. Hope this helps!
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