Ian Biro All work Copyright Andy Sewina (c) 2006 - 2017
This is so beautifully done.. a unique take on the prompt..
A thought provoking haiku....so very true.
I like the warmongers to the feather... nice!
Rightly so and never a conscience felt for the innocents who suffer. Brilliant twist to the prompt!Hank
Warmongers affect many around the world, a contemptible occupation that ruffles up a few feathers!!
smart. love the last line.
Brilliant Haiku! Well conceived.
Powerful drama in these descriptive words!
There's a lot in this I feel - a whole narrative in three lines, and a point, too.
I like to roll the words around on my tongue!Featherless Pomegranate
Cracking middle line, Andy.
what a strong ending!
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