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Tuesday, 20 September 2011

The Height of Haiku Challenge, Day 20 - Feather

Welcome to Day 20 of The Height of Haiku Challenge, where your challenge is to write 30 haiku in 30 days. The prompt today is FEATHER suggested by Nimue.

Here's mine:

FEATHER

They fleece each other
Warmongers to the feather
Wage wars without walls
20092011

12 comments:

  1. This is so beautifully done.. a unique take on the prompt..

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  2. A thought provoking haiku....so very true.

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  3. I like the warmongers to the feather... nice!

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  4. Rightly so and never a conscience felt for the innocents who suffer. Brilliant twist to the prompt!

    Hank

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  5. Warmongers affect many around the world, a contemptible occupation that ruffles up a few feathers!!

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  6. Brilliant Haiku! Well conceived.

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  7. Powerful drama in these descriptive words!

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  8. There's a lot in this I feel - a whole narrative in three lines, and a point, too.

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