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Tuesday, 20 September 2011

The Height of Haiku Challenge, Day 20 - Feather

Welcome to Day 20 of The Height of Haiku Challenge, where your challenge is to write 30 haiku in 30 days. The prompt today is FEATHER suggested by Nimue.

Here's mine:

FEATHER

They fleece each other
Warmongers to the feather
Wage wars without walls
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12 comments:

  1. Ramesh Sood20 September 2011 at 10:04

    This is so beautifully done.. a unique take on the prompt..

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  2. Rek Sesh20 September 2011 at 10:40

    A thought provoking haiku....so very true.

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  3. Scarlet20 September 2011 at 11:19

    I like the warmongers to the feather... nice!

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  4. kaykuala20 September 2011 at 11:54

    Rightly so and never a conscience felt for the innocents who suffer. Brilliant twist to the prompt!

    Hank

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  5. Nanka20 September 2011 at 12:21

    Warmongers affect many around the world, a contemptible occupation that ruffles up a few feathers!!

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  6. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barry20 September 2011 at 16:07

    smart. love the last line.

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  7. Saras20 September 2011 at 17:01

    Brilliant Haiku! Well conceived.

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  8. Gemma Wiseman20 September 2011 at 21:22

    Powerful drama in these descriptive words!

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  9. Anonymous20 September 2011 at 21:40

    There's a lot in this I feel - a whole narrative in three lines, and a point, too.

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  10. Magical Mystical Teacher20 September 2011 at 23:34

    I like to roll the words around on my tongue!


    Featherless Pomegranate

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  11. Anonymous21 September 2011 at 09:32

    Cracking middle line, Andy.

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  12. dsnake121 September 2011 at 12:23

    what a strong ending!

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