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Monday 23 March 2009

Monday Poetry Train Revisited #20

Written for Monday Poetry Train Revisited
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The NaisaiKu Challenge

Miamiesqueish
Urbanizacionic

PLAYA SUN SAND SI
Urbanizacionic
Miamiesqueish

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14 comments:

  1. I didnt understand this!!!Opps. Can you explain.

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  2. Hi Jeeves, Yes I guess I should - I've just been in Spanish speaking Tenerife where they have this word Urbanizacion, everythig is modern and they have the knack of making a relatively small town seem like a big city in places. Although most of the buildings are what I would term modern Spanish, square and rendered concrete blocks, there are some Miami style hotels and apartments in the older part of the town which add a certain something to the place. The last line is wordplay si for sea etc. Hope this doesn't confuse you even more.
    Andy

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  3. Thanks :) Now I understand

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  4. lol, i got miami and urban at first read. thanks for the explanation :-)

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  5. Very clever! (Your explanation helped...lol) :~)

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  6. I went along for the word play fun and thought that the narrator was comparing Miami to 'Playa Sun Sand Si', meaning Miami was too urban for him.

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  7. They say some things provide inspiration, but I never thought of sangria :-)

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  8. Thanks for the explanation - I have to admit I didn't see the embedded words at first read... Clever work, clever!

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  9. You're so clever! (I'm glad you added the explanation, though!)

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  10. enjoy it thouroughly, Andy aka Danny! clever wordplay... great alliterations...after my own heart!

    BTW thank you for the comment on my wordpress blog!

    ciao,
    mariana

    [alkonnect connects] "of beings... human and less... "

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  11. I got the mix (squash!) of spanish / english, but now I know the roots.

    fabulous.

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  12. it sounds like a prayer! i don't know why.

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  13. thanks for the explaination !! you do have a knack for different lines !

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  14. I've been looking at this for two days now, and am pleased to see I'd interpreted it properly.

    VERY cool job.

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