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Tuesday, 21 April 2009

NaPoWriMo (21) Tuesday NaisaiKu ReadWritePoem

Written for NaPoWriMo day twenty-one
Posted to ReadWritePoem
and The NaiSaiKu Challenge?

Vingt-et-un, Pontoon!
Twenty-first century rocks!!
TWENTY-ONE TODAY
Twenty-first century rocks!!
Vingt-et-un, Pontoon!
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The Venetian Church
Looking down on the canal
SCAFFOLDING GOES UP
Looking down on the canal
The Venetian Church
210409a

Have you tried The American Sandwich yet?

8 comments:

  1. this was nice !! i got busy n missed writig a naisaiku for this week .. will soon write one !!

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  2. Hi Pretty You!! Have you seen The American Sandwich yet?

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  3. A pontoon and the 21st century - a good connection. 'The twenty-first century rocks' - nice and positive - that's what we need.

    I have read and commented on the American sandwich.

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  4. for sure u did good...i also like the connection

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  5. such an interesting poetic form. It certainly lends itself to the energy you show here :-)

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  6. Hey STguy
    that was you in chinatown? pigeon park is a very small..very small park just beside Vancouver (BC Canada)Hmmmmmmmmare you sure it was you..if it was i wasn't following you or spying...I don't think........

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  7. Love the first one. Got it about right.

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