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Thursday, 5 February 2009

NaisaiKu!

Posted to Totally Optional Prompts "Repitition" and Read Write Poem

This is a sandwich
I am the meat and two veg
I'm a slice of bread
I AM THE MEAT AND TWO VEG
I'm a slice of bread
I am the meat and two veg
This is a sandwich

***** ******* *****

I'm a jam butty
Butter and bramble jelly
Try me spread on rye
I'M A JAM BUTTY
Try me spread on rye
Butter and bramble jelly
I'm a jam butty

***** ******* *****

Two slices of bread
Bacon Lettuce Tomato
A squirt of Mayo
BACON LETTUCE TOMATO
A squirt of Mayo
Bacon Lettuce Tomato
Two slices of bread

5**** 7****** 5****

I'm a Docker's Wedge
Thick spread with flippin' drippin'
On two crusts of bread
I'M A DOCKER'S WEDGE
On two crusts of bread
Thick spread with flippin' drippin'
I'm a Docker's Wedge
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NaisaiKu devised by Wendy Naisa
Wendy Naisa is an anagram of Andy Sewina
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28 comments:

  1. Philip Thrift5 February 2009 at 14:25

    NaisaiKu is Kool! and Delicious!

    (however, a deep fried jam butty sounds too good to be true)

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  2. Andy Sewina5 February 2009 at 14:31

    Hi Phil, Thanks, many thanks! I Like the jam butty reference you gave me. The worst deep fried food I heard about was the deep fried doner kebab which of course came from a chippy in Glasgow, the home of the deep fried Mars bar. Strange but true!

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  3. Anonymous5 February 2009 at 14:50

    yummy !!!!! :D

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  4. Tumblewords:5 February 2009 at 18:54

    How fun is this! I love it - it puts the zing in words!

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  5. Raven's Wing Poetry5 February 2009 at 19:44

    I like the wordplay and repetition in this piece.

    -Nicole

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  6. Gordon Mason5 February 2009 at 20:45

    Poetry on a plate.

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  7. Anonymous5 February 2009 at 21:15

    Really very clever form and content. Well done.

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  8. anthonynorth5 February 2009 at 22:06

    Ages since I've had a literary lunch :-)

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  9. Anonymous6 February 2009 at 01:00

    Hi Pretty you, don't you just love food?

    Thanks WonderfulWords, love that word zing!

    Thanks Nicole, enjoyed your book, by the way!

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  10. Anonymous6 February 2009 at 01:03

    I enjoyed that - whats for dessert?

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  11. Anonymous6 February 2009 at 01:06

    Hi Gordon, thanks for visiting STG.. I don't get many real poets coming here (only joking!).

    Hi Richard, (another real poet!)many many thanks for the kind comment...

    Hi Tony
    You're very welcome to take a virtual bite of my Online sandwich!
    -Andy

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  12. Anonymous6 February 2009 at 01:16

    Hi Stan,

    custard and cold cake
    banana and sultana
    with Chantilly cream
    CUSTARD AND COLD CAKE
    with Chantilly cream
    banana and sultana
    custard and cold cake

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  13. Anonymous6 February 2009 at 01:54

    I can take a hint - still working on it.

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  14. Deb6 February 2009 at 03:01

    Love to read these out loud! Fun.

    Of course, I've got a different imagination for Dockers Wedge. (I am thinking clothing pulled tight. Might be a matter for interpretation! Ha!)

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  15. Deb6 February 2009 at 03:03

    An, m'dear. You should watch from FoodTV from the (States) south for cra-a-a-zy fried food. We're talking Twinkies, Snickers, OMG, heart attack crazy food. (Put the remote down!)

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  16. Anonymous6 February 2009 at 17:48

    Cool to use an anagram of your name!
    Now hun, I'm gry (if you can figure that last part out...well I'm sure you can! unless you're caught up making another sandwich)

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  17. susan7 February 2009 at 01:53

    It took me a minute and then after rereading, I thought of my nephew and I thought he'd love to hear these. Fun read. Thanks.

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  18. Wendy Naisa7 February 2009 at 02:35

    Hi everybody you can come over to the NaisaiKu.. blog and visit me, if you like! www.naisaiku.blogspot.com

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  19. Wayne Pitchko7 February 2009 at 22:06

    Read them to my grandaughter..then had to make her a jam sandwich

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  20. Anonymous7 February 2009 at 22:22

    Hi Deb, in this part of the world a dockers wedge was also known as a dockers doorstep, they were that thick (the sandwiches) or so they tell me...

    Hi gel, I'm starving! an anagram of gel would be 'leg' but Emerald eyes would have to be 'see my dealer'. or 'yes me leader'. and together they might read 'released my leg' perhaps.

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  21. Anonymous7 February 2009 at 22:27

    Thanks Susan, They're fun to write too!

    Hi Wayne, thanks for visiting STG.. hope your grandaughter enjoyed her sandwich!

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  22. Anonymous8 February 2009 at 01:13

    This poem looks like a lot of fun. Makes me hungry too!

    Thanks for your tips on my poem. I revised it after your comment.

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  23. Anonymous9 February 2009 at 04:44

    chatty little sandwich makes me hungry for bread...

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  24. Andy Sewina9 February 2009 at 10:55

    Thanks Christine, I'm going for breakfast right now!

    Hi OMB, there's a thought - a talking sandwich!

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  25. Anonymous9 February 2009 at 17:23

    I like the patterns here. It took a while to see it, but it's a cool form. Looking forward to lunch now too.

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  26. Anonymous9 February 2009 at 22:21

    Thanks James, as the pattern evolves there certainly seems to be more scope than I first thought...

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  27. Anonymous10 February 2009 at 02:57

    "See my dealer" LMAO! That's one way to market my art!"
    (I knew about the leg anagram...)

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  28. Andy Sewina11 February 2009 at 01:04

    Hi gel, we'll have to stop meeting like this... did I tell you about a poet I know in Manchester, he calls himself Agraman the human anagram!

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