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Friday, 3 April 2009

NaPoWriMo (3)

ReadWritePoem napowrimo #3: three in a row
Here's mine:
Crack the shell
Suck the albumen
Break the yoke

Break the yoke
suck the albumen
crack the shell
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Crack the shell
Suck the albumen
BREAK THE YOKE
suck the albumen
crack the shell
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The NaisaiKu Challenge? Supports NaPoWriMo

Also written for NaPoWriMo - day three:


LOONY MOON TUNE
I'm making monkey with the loony moon tune
She's changing direction and smiling at me
I'm closer to her when I'm by the sea
She's pulling the tides to be nearer to me

With her I wither and I melt when she comes
Without her, I doubt if I'd ever be true
With her I have everything that I need
Without her I'm nothing for eternity

I blinky blink, blink and she winks back at me
She's making monkey, loony moon tune, with me
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Have you taken The NaisaiKu Challenge? Yet???

6 comments:

  1. thanks for using the prompt!

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  2. Nice one....but I just boiled 3 eggs...and it diid not work.

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  3. kewt rhyme almost like children poetry!

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  4. this one's cute...i like it

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  5. These warrant illustration by a clever artist. ;-)


    PLAYING WITH PUDDLES

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