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Tuesday, 3 March 2009

Tuesday NaisaiKu.. Week Three

Written for and posted to The Naisaiku.. Challenge! - Week Three

sitting here waiting
strike while the iron's still hot?
deliberating

deliberating
strike while the iron's still hot?
sitting here waiting

sitting here waiting
strike while the iron's still hot?
DELIBERATING
strike while the iron's still hot?
sitting here waiting
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16 comments:

  1. Anonymous3 March 2009 at 01:28

    Waiting fur wot? This isern't reel poertry! Sweet talka!!!

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  2. Stan Ski3 March 2009 at 02:25

    I'll have to think about this one.
    Or should I just say...?

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  3. Andy Sewina3 March 2009 at 02:33

    Hi anonymous, very poetically put! So sorry you don't like it - I think you might have just invented 'The Anonymous Sentence' Phew!!

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  4. Andy Sewina3 March 2009 at 02:35

    Hi Stan, 'I really can't make up my ...'

    what did you say?

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  5. Bharath3 March 2009 at 04:17

    nice thoughts here.
    what better ways to sandwich "deliberation"
    Liked this immensely!

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  6. Jeeves3 March 2009 at 05:01

    Sitting here, Waiting. It seems eternal na. Nice one here

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  7. gautami tripathy3 March 2009 at 06:19

    You wrote my life-story?!

    :D

    out of focus

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  8. Anonymous3 March 2009 at 08:59

    Hi !nversed Poignancy, The way you put it, it makes me wanna take a bite!

    Thanks Jeeves, so eternal were his thoughts that he's still sitting there, waiting to come to time. "Sould I go there," he deliberates, eternally, it seems!

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  9. Anonymous3 March 2009 at 09:01

    Hi Gautami, tell me about it?
    -Andy

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  10. Anonymous3 March 2009 at 12:05

    hope the iron is still hot ;)

    nice one !!

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  11. spacedlaw4 March 2009 at 20:13

    The more I see this form, the more I am impressed by its hypnotic potentialities.
    My contribution will be published tomorrow.

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  12. Anonymous4 March 2009 at 22:15

    Hi Pretty You!! I'm still thinking about it, deliberating!

    Hi Spacedlaw,
    'hypnotic potentialities' Phew, Can't wait!!!

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  13. Cassiopeia Rises5 March 2009 at 17:21

    WELL, I liked it. I thought it very clever and funny.

    love-bd

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  14. Sepiru Chris6 March 2009 at 13:50

    Very much liked it, STG.

    It's interesting how the form is being played with, across the spectrum of contributors.

    I am not sure that I get anonymous' joke, for it seems (s)he is jesting; I like it, especially how the repetition invokes alternate meanings (which I have thought of as mandatory, but I suppose it isn't).

    Tschuess,
    Chris

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  15. Andy Sewina7 March 2009 at 12:30

    Hi Bd, funny? I'm still sitting here waiting... (for the punchline).

    Hi Chris I think everything needs time to evolve, there's some good form breaking out in places and I think people will always interrpret things in their own way, so yeah!
    As for Anonymous he/she usually signs him/herself B, I presume it's the same person - I think it was their attempt at a Haiku - very poetic of them, don't you think?

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  16. Anonymous8 March 2009 at 13:30

    This has been my week.

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