Haiku Challenge 2012
Day 27 – February 27th – Theme: Paint the Image
Photo Clicked by Siva of: Siva's Art Work
Photo Clicked by Siva of: Siva's Art Work
Here's mine:
THE FALL OF MAN
Narrow is the path
If only leaves had fallen
Innumerable
27022012
Narrow is the path
If only leaves had fallen
Innumerable
27022012
Here's my Day Twenty-Seven from 2011
I can imagine leaves as my companions on the narrow path...crunch, crunch, crunch...
ReplyDeleteWow. This is one of the best I've read!
ReplyDeleteI loved the different image you tried to portray with words.
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Wow!...I loved your imagination....You painted this image creatively and differently.....Thanks for sharing :)
ReplyDeleteOpen gate of your heart
Now there's a thought ~ If only leaves had fallen, then innumerable lives wouldn't have been lost. Amazing!
ReplyDeleteBrilliant, Andy!
ReplyDeletea totally different take...loved it...:)
ReplyDeleteA perfect haiku poem.. the cutting line and crisp images are very clear.
ReplyDeleteVery well done ~
Bravo!! :)
ReplyDeleteHere is my Day 27.
Amazing ..a very unique take on a difficult picture.. thanks..
ReplyDeleteLove the metaphorical use of the leaves! A very moving, thoughtful haiku!
ReplyDeleteOnce again I apologise for your difficulty with my blog! I really don't understand why when there are no ads on it ....which would explain the script issue! And especially don't understand when no one else has mentioned this difficulty! I have asked a number of visitors with different platforms! I guess I just keep apologising.
Wise words Andy.
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Brilliant Andy..!
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