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Monday 27 February 2012

Haiku Challenge 2012 - Day 27


Haiku Challenge 2012

Day 27 – February 27th – Theme: Paint the Image

Photo Clicked by Siva of: Siva's Art Work

Here's mine:
THE FALL OF MAN

Narrow is the path
If only leaves had fallen
Innumerable

27022012

13 comments:

  1. I can imagine leaves as my companions on the narrow path...crunch, crunch, crunch...

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  2. Wow. This is one of the best I've read!

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  3. I loved the different image you tried to portray with words.
    :)

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  4. Wow!...I loved your imagination....You painted this image creatively and differently.....Thanks for sharing :)


    Open gate of your heart

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  5. Now there's a thought ~ If only leaves had fallen, then innumerable lives wouldn't have been lost. Amazing!

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  6. Brilliant, Andy!

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  7. a totally different take...loved it...:)

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  8. A perfect haiku poem.. the cutting line and crisp images are very clear.

    Very well done ~

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  9. Amazing ..a very unique take on a difficult picture.. thanks..

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  10. Love the metaphorical use of the leaves! A very moving, thoughtful haiku!

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