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Thursday, 12 February 2009

TOP & RWP

Posted to Totally Optional Prompts and to Read Write Poem Just because I love you...

NaisaiKu..
Have you tried it yet?

I love you frantic
I wish every day could be
Saint Valentine's day
SAINT VALENTINE'S DAY
Saint Valentines day
I wish every day could be
I love you frantic
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22 comments:

  1. very creative :) liked the line arrangement :)

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  2. I am liking this form more and more.

    BTW, I have reviewd a book titled Frantic on my other blog! Just click on my name to reach there!

    enthrall

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  3. I'll have to try this form
    sometime
    sometime
    I'll have to try this form

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  4. Love this poetry form, never tried it though. Has a lyrical feel to it.

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  5. Laughing. This is so cool. I'll second Anthony North's comment!

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  6. tried first type here :

    http://ofsomethingsomething.blogspot.com/2009/02/naisaiku-my-heart-broken-glass.html

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  7. Hi Gautami, I'll clink your links in a moment. glad you're liking the NaisaiKu..

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  8. Hi Tony, you know what they say about flattery! Love your little 'sometime' and when you do post a NaisaiKu on 'Beyond the Blog!' I'll add you to the fast growing NaisaiKu.. Bloggage!
    -Andy

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  9. Hi Ofira, many thanks for the comment, I really enjoyed reading your poetry today!


    Hi Phil, I love you three!

    Hi Sue@Tumblewords, I can't wait to read a contribution of your WonderFulWords..

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  10. Laughing - I couldn't call myself a vegetarian and the Camels I knew are missing, anyway. Glad you asked, though! :))

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  11. Hi Sue@Tumblewords, The Camel reference was from an old joke - you reminded me of it with the shirt sleeve bulge... Sorry about that!
    -Andy

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  12. That says it all!

    Love the simplicity!

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  13. It's really cool how Saint Valentine's Day repeats 3x in the middle especially after the word frantic in planted in the first line. Very cool. I, also, might have to try this form sometime. I'm intrigued.

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  14. Thanks Linda, I try to keep it simple but I do get a little out of control, sometimes!

    Hi James, thanks for the in-depth comment.
    I'd love to read a NaisaiKu.. written by you!

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  15. Your wish might come true, if she loves as frantic as you.

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  16. Cool form that is still on my list to try out.
    If we were not "frantic" in other daily routines, then Valentine's Day could be every day.
    >>>>> Belgium chocolates for you for Val Day! :D

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  17. Thanks Stan, I'll look forward to it!

    Hi gel, Happy Val Day to you too!
    Many thanks for the virtual Belgium chocolates!

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