NaisaiKu..
Have you tried it yet?
I love you frantic
I wish every day could be
Saint Valentine's day
SAINT VALENTINE'S DAY
Saint Valentines day
I wish every day could be
I love you frantic
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Saint Valentine's day
SAINT VALENTINE'S DAY
Saint Valentines day
I wish every day could be
I love you frantic
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very creative :) liked the line arrangement :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Pretty You!
ReplyDeleteIt's a NaisaKu..
I am liking this form more and more.
ReplyDeleteBTW, I have reviewd a book titled Frantic on my other blog! Just click on my name to reach there!
enthrall
I'll have to try this form
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sometime
I'll have to try this form
Love this poetry form, never tried it though. Has a lyrical feel to it.
ReplyDeletea ♥ to ♥ reflection
ReplyDeleteLaughing. This is so cool. I'll second Anthony North's comment!
ReplyDeletetried first type here :
ReplyDeletehttp://ofsomethingsomething.blogspot.com/2009/02/naisaiku-my-heart-broken-glass.html
Hi Gautami, I'll clink your links in a moment. glad you're liking the NaisaiKu..
ReplyDeleteHi Tony, you know what they say about flattery! Love your little 'sometime' and when you do post a NaisaiKu on 'Beyond the Blog!' I'll add you to the fast growing NaisaiKu.. Bloggage!
ReplyDelete-Andy
Hi Ofira, many thanks for the comment, I really enjoyed reading your poetry today!
ReplyDeleteHi Phil, I love you three!
Hi Sue@Tumblewords, I can't wait to read a contribution of your WonderFulWords..
Laughing - I couldn't call myself a vegetarian and the Camels I knew are missing, anyway. Glad you asked, though! :))
ReplyDeleteHi Sue@Tumblewords, The Camel reference was from an old joke - you reminded me of it with the shirt sleeve bulge... Sorry about that!
ReplyDelete-Andy
That says it all!
ReplyDeleteLove the simplicity!
It's really cool how Saint Valentine's Day repeats 3x in the middle especially after the word frantic in planted in the first line. Very cool. I, also, might have to try this form sometime. I'm intrigued.
ReplyDeleteThanks Linda, I try to keep it simple but I do get a little out of control, sometimes!
ReplyDeleteHi James, thanks for the in-depth comment.
I'd love to read a NaisaiKu.. written by you!
Your wish might come true, if she loves as frantic as you.
ReplyDeleteCool form that is still on my list to try out.
ReplyDeleteIf we were not "frantic" in other daily routines, then Valentine's Day could be every day.
>>>>> Belgium chocolates for you for Val Day! :D
Thanks Stan, I'll look forward to it!
ReplyDeleteHi gel, Happy Val Day to you too!
Many thanks for the virtual Belgium chocolates!
Sweet!!
ReplyDeletePretty!!
ReplyDeleteCute :)
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