Here's mine:
GHOSTS
Some of us see them
Dark masquerading as light
Not always at night
29102011
Some of us see them
Dark masquerading as light
Not always at night
29102011
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Enjoyed this, and a great last line.
ReplyDeletelike it:) and keep visiting ny blog
ReplyDeletethe best one.. true
ReplyDeleteNice concept and a different take!!
ReplyDeleteVery imaginative take on the prompt!
ReplyDeleteEXCELLENT gem of truth!! :-)
ReplyDeleteClever. I like it very much.
ReplyDeleteVery nice! Three snappy lines, ending with a bam. :)
ReplyDeletegreat lines, andy!
ReplyDeletewe chinese have a saying, "humans can be more scary than ghosts."
I agree, ghosts roam not only at night...not here anyway ☺.
ReplyDeleteI agree with wordcoaster: "3 snappy lines."
Peace, Siggi in Downeast Maine
NOt always at night -- now that's the truth!
ReplyDeleteI see them in my head!
ReplyDeletesome of us see them, and some of us don't :(
ReplyDeletemy entry http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2011/10/29/four-ghost-senryu/
Good haiku!
ReplyDeleteMost of us imagine them! I'm following your blog. Like your idea of ghosts masquerading as light and moving among us in the day.
ReplyDeleteRosie
a different take on the prompt....very nice ~
ReplyDeleteYes, yes, very true. Ghost can have many different forms. Great work. Thank you for visiting mine earlier too.
ReplyDeleteLove the last line...great job!
ReplyDeletenice work...ghosts not always seen at night...how true
ReplyDeleteagreeable, smiles.
ReplyDeleteYou have good eyes!
ReplyDeleteGhosts of Trees