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This is so good..I feel I have already read it (if that makes sense)..professional choice of each syllable..Jae
This is so true. Your special Haiku :-)
lovely and so true sometimes the amateur gardener has the green thumb.
Andy, were we on the same page today..no I didn't write a haiku..
Great use of the words. Short and concise.
Now I am totally looking forward to the last of the snow. The drifts are gone, but it's still too soon to plant anything.
Succinct and powerful.
A perfect haiku. (Good enough for a thousand years perhaps?)
very short and sweethis haiku always a treatandy drums his beat
This made me smile. Beautifully done :)
wonderful - succinct and perfect.
Wow. This is amazing. I agree with oldegg. :)
This is one great haiku! You've said so much in so few words!
As other's have already said, so well crafted. Brilliant.
Excellent juxtaposition of "amateur" and "diligent"!Richard
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This is so good..I feel I have already read it (if that makes sense)..professional choice of each syllable..Jae
ReplyDeleteThis is so true. Your special Haiku :-)
ReplyDeletelovely and so true sometimes the amateur gardener has the green thumb.
ReplyDeleteAndy, were we on the same page today..no I didn't write a haiku..
ReplyDeleteGreat use of the words. Short and concise.
ReplyDeleteNow I am totally looking forward to the last of the snow. The drifts are gone, but it's still too soon to plant anything.
ReplyDeleteSuccinct and powerful.
ReplyDeleteA perfect haiku. (Good enough for a thousand years perhaps?)
ReplyDeletevery short and sweet
ReplyDeletehis haiku always a treat
andy drums his beat
This made me smile. Beautifully done :)
Deletewonderful - succinct and perfect.
ReplyDeleteWow. This is amazing. I agree with oldegg. :)
ReplyDeleteThis is one great haiku! You've said so much in so few words!
ReplyDeleteAs other's have already said, so well crafted. Brilliant.
ReplyDeleteExcellent juxtaposition of "amateur" and "diligent"!
ReplyDeleteRichard