The prompt this week is the line from a Frank Sinatra song 'Come fly with me... '
Here's mine:
COME FLY
Come fly with me high in the sky
let's float above this thing called love
up up up in the stratosphere
just you and me and him and her
and all the lonely loons at night
that sleep all day in case they wake
come fly come fly come fly come fly
come fly away across the sky
without a care for tomorrow
and if you do I'll meet you there
and if you don't then you don't care
Come fly with me high in the sky
let's float above this thing called love
come fly away across the sky
without a care for tomorrow
and if you do I'll meet you there
and if you don't then you don't care
Repeat
09012012
let's float above this thing called love
up up up in the stratosphere
just you and me and him and her
and all the lonely loons at night
that sleep all day in case they wake
come fly come fly come fly come fly
come fly away across the sky
without a care for tomorrow
and if you do I'll meet you there
and if you don't then you don't care
Come fly with me high in the sky
let's float above this thing called love
come fly away across the sky
without a care for tomorrow
and if you do I'll meet you there
and if you don't then you don't care
Repeat
09012012
This really has a nice rhythm and pace. I read through it several times. I could hear a melody in my head. Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteLOL I was singing the song in my head!! LOL
ReplyDeleteNicely done :)
Thanks Denise, so glad you could hear the melody.
ReplyDeletePhew, thanks Daydreamertoo, you posted your comment at exactly the same time as I posted one above. How's that for synchronisation?
ReplyDeleteI could hear a rhythm and melody as I read this ... I actually prefer it to the original version written by Jimmy Van Heusen and Sammy Cahn! "And if you do I'll meet you there and if you don't then you don't care" is a great line!
ReplyDeleteWell done. I could hear it sing in my head.
ReplyDeleteSee you there!
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