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Friday 11 April 2014

NaPoWriMo 2014 Day Eleven

Day Eleven
NaPoWriMo 2014

It was like she was walking in the park
Not walking floating just hovering there
In her favourite place smelling the flowers
What colour are daises she asked again

White I told her before she remembered
Yes I can smell the dandelions too
She said and something else painted yellow
That’ll be the daffodils I told her

Wonderful she said looking for mushrooms
Her bottom lip twitching oh so slightly
An air of expectancy on her face
I think I've found a marigold she said

I walked towards the haunted house with her
When I woke up and turned round she was gone

My Day Eleven from 2013 
Please click the back links on each post back to 2009 you won't be disappointed.


  1. It always amazed me the way Nic could recognise colours by her sense of smell.

  2. Yeah, thanks Stan and she used to love the Haunted House in the park too. I've put a link to a poem and pictures of it into the piece now.

  3. Also, if you clink on the link above - Labels About Nicola, you will find several other poems I wrote about her over the years.

  4. wow, that brought a few tears to my eyes. you really capture her beautifully here, well done x

  5. Thanks Ruth, haven't seen you for ages.


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