Day Twenty-Seven
Wordle 158
Leave, Cheat, Chew, Branch,
Channel, Beastly, Few,
Cancer, Release, Speak, Become, Beading.
OLD OAK
Don’t ever leave me please don’t
let me go
You know I didn't mean to cheat
on you
Across the channel things were
oh so slow
Don’t chew me up and spit me out
my blue
I took a chance reached for the
candle branch
I could become anything if I
could fly
Release me from the hold you
have carte blanche
Don’t speak to me of debts and
courts to try
After all you beat the beastly
cancer
And I’m right here with you back
by your side
If only I really knew the answer
I do know that there is no place
to hide
Under the coffin lid’s old oak
beading
The chosen few need no help
with reading
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My Day Twenty-Seven from 2013
Sad!
ReplyDeleteGlad you took a chance. You may know the answer...for you, at least.
ReplyDeleteThis is a lovely sonnet. Well wordled!
ReplyDeleteI am still looking for the answer, Andy. Nice sonnet indeed.
ReplyDeletePamela
Love the sonnet, how words flowing...last line a little mysterious...
ReplyDeleteA well-penned sonnet. There is a sort of ambiguity in your words which gives it a nice touch.
ReplyDelete-HA
Good sonnet, the last line is intriguing
ReplyDeletehttp://thequietone.net/2014/04/27/wordle-poem-158/
Death and carrots... Don't like the thought of either, but seeing in the dark... 'what's up doc?'
ReplyDeleteAnd that last verse is a tale Grimm also..apple trees and wishes..delightfully mysterious
ReplyDeleteA sonnet.. how impressive to do that out of the wordle.. and how sad with last couplet..
ReplyDeleteWho ever knows the whole truth? Even the chosen few who know it may not understand. "No man is an island..." but often we appear so. Intriguing piece of work.
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