Week 470
Tasteful
Selfish
Realistic
Poetic
Flash fiction in 51 syllables
THE NEW SHOES
Dawn bought a
costume to go with the new shoes her husband Dave gave her. What a tasteful
outfit thought her pet robot on the way from the store. I thought
Dave was selfish but those glass slippers look so realistic.
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love your story
ReplyDeleteThanks Sheilagh!
ReplyDeleteGlass slippers?! Uh oh. I can see all kinds of problems, even if they would be totally cool.
ReplyDeleteI think they belong to Cinderella!
DeleteThe pet robot makes this story sublime - reminds me that when flash is good - it's really good!
ReplyDeleteGive a guy half a chance to impress his other half, he'll treat her like a queen. That's what loving care does to the minds!
ReplyDeleteHank