Here's mine:
HYPNOTIC
Who mesmerised you
Blah blink hypnotic blink blah
You mesmerised who
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Who mesmerised you
Blah blink hypnotic blink blah
You mesmerised who
07092011
Here's my 3WW piece.
www.sewina.blogspot.com Marian Bironski aka Ian Biro, Manchester, Mannamead, Manila. All work Copyright Andy Sewina (c) 2006 - 2024
fun write...ha..ha...
ReplyDeleteterrific, I used somewhat the same idea of repetition, very hypnotic write
ReplyDeletevery clever.
ReplyDeleteClever palindrome in a Haiku form!! :)
ReplyDelete:-).
ReplyDeleteVery clever and a great read. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteOh, you had fun with this one!
ReplyDeleteHypnotic Meadow
This is clever and fun...did you get an answer?
ReplyDeleteInterest form.Very clever of you my friend.
ReplyDeleteMelanie
You've caught the theme completely: great haiku.
ReplyDeleteWhen I'm done reading this you'll clap your hands three times & I will be fully awake, but I'll remember nothing of what happened, right?
ReplyDeleteHi Ron, You're back in the room!
ReplyDeleteCute Andy lots of fun to read!
ReplyDeletea haiku palindrome, that's a fun play, very nice
ReplyDeleteyou are having fun. :)
ReplyDeleteI didn't realise it was a palindrome until I read the comments.
ReplyDeleteNicely done.
a fun palindrome :) well written!
ReplyDeleteLove this Andy. I like the way the written haiku is shaped like an eye too.
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