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Monday 13 April 2009

NaPoWriMo (13) Monday Poetry Train Revisited

Written for NaPoWriMo day thirteen
and posted at Monday Poetry Train Revisited


thirteen is left right left

but I wanna right left right

try as I might I can't

start or end on right

left right left leaves me

stuck on thirteen with you



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  1. lol...very cleverly done! I especially loved your 'whatamigonnado'.

  2. nice...."sit tight" or move on just keep writing

  3. I say take a chance and go in that new direction! What's the worst that can happen? (I s'pose you could get lost in the maze...)

    Thanks for the Saturday Scribes plug, btw!


  4. whats with left n right ? I didnt get it erm...

  5. Thanks for all the coments - this is such a busy time for everybody with NaPoWriMo in full swing!

    Hi Winnie the poohi,
    Left, right, left, right, left!
    It's a marching thing, You count left-one, right-two, left-three, right-four etc. Therefore, thirteen would be the left foot. Hope this helps!


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