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Friday, 23 September 2011
The Height of Haiku Challenge, Day 23 - Water
Welcome to Day 23 of The Height of Haiku Challenge, where your challenge is to write 30 haiku in 30 days, with the themes given here. The prompt today is WATER suggested by Amy Trumble.
Here's mine:
TONGUE TWISTER
Trickling tap Tickles the tastebuds Taps the tongue 23092011
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nice image of that trickling tap ~
ReplyDeleteLovely lines tickling your imagination.
ReplyDeleteA clever haiku.
ReplyDeleteCertainly tickled my taste buds.
Nice alliteration!
ReplyDeleteReally a tongue twister! Ah! Water...nothing more refreshing!
ReplyDeleteYes a tongue twister that tickles the imagination with tantalizing taste of water :)
ReplyDeleteWell done, Mr. Alliteration!
ReplyDeleteMy Watery Haiku
a tongue twister alright! fun read!
ReplyDeleteLittle events make things move. Just don't bother them.Well said Andy!
ReplyDeleteHank