DON’T WORK
If you don’t eat
you don’t stop
If you don’t stop
you don’t play
If you don’t play
you don’t stay
If you don’t stay
you don’t sleep
If you don’t sleep
you don’t wake
If you don’t wake
you don’t take
If you don’t take
you don’t make
If you don’t make
you don’t work
If you don’t work
you don’t eat!
If you don’t eat
You don’t live
If you don’t live
You don’t breathe
If you don’t breathe
You don’t need
If you don’t need
You don’t have
If you don’t have
You don’t want
If you don’t want
You don’t give
If you don’t give
a fig about work!
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That was fun.
ReplyDeleteMad Kane
Nice trip. There is something about figs that make it happen (;
ReplyDeleteAs much fun to look at as to read. This was pleasing.
ReplyDeleteThanks Mad Kane, Alan and Dennis for the comments and many thanks to everyone else who visited.
ReplyDeletei'm sorry andy but these people don't know what they're talking about; this is your most inane poem yet!
ReplyDeleteHi Ruth, Thanks for the candid comment. The point is that there is no point - if that's 'inane' then you've really hit the nail on the head!
ReplyDeleteinteresting structure!
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